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The first chapter of Book Two is in the submissions queue.

I'll check it once it's live for any obvious formatting goofs, but if anyone spots a mistake, please drop me a message and I'll get the corrections in ASAP.

For those who read Wilhelm Scream, this literally picks up the next morning, is more of what Scream was in terms of style and content, and is going to run longer than Scream's 265,000 words!

If you've not read Scream first, pretty much all of Sonata will not make much sense as characters, terms, etc., will not be re-introduced but just taken for granted. Really, go back and read it first if this kind of story appeals.

Further chapters will follow as I edit and proof them.

Cheers...Clee

And so here it is at long last, the re-proofed final chapter of Wilhelm Scream, in the submissions queue.

This one matters.

If you've read the original version, you may want to re-read this version as the ending is different. Very.

It also sets up Book Two as more open than it was originally going to be, with lots of directions for current and new characters to go in.

Rest assured, the mystery of The Thing will be explored more in Book Two, but it won't be wrapped up (sort of) until Book Three.

In the meantime, Luke and Stef and Leri will have plenty to keep them amused.

Enjoy...Clee

THe penultimate chapter of Scream has just gone into the queue for reposting after mild proof-reading.

Still nothing more than textual polishing to see, but it does make the flow clearer in a couple of places, plus spanks a couple of goofs.

Clee

It's not always like this, but, another day and another chapter proof-read and in the queue for posting.

Still no great changes, though it now reads a bit more smoothly than it did, plus one or two goofs got stamped on.

Clee

And another, proof-read, tidied up, and in the queue.

More polishing of the prose, with not so much changed this chapter.

Clee