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And so here it is at long last, the re-proofed final chapter of Wilhelm Scream, in the submissions queue.
This one matters.
If you've read the original version, you may want to re-read this version as the ending is different. Very.
It also sets up Book Two as more open than it was originally going to be, with lots of directions for current and new characters to go in.
Rest assured, the mystery of The Thing will be explored more in Book Two, but it won't be wrapped up (sort of) until Book Three.
In the meantime, Luke and Stef and Leri will have plenty to keep them amused.
Enjoy...Clee
THe penultimate chapter of Scream has just gone into the queue for reposting after mild proof-reading.
Still nothing more than textual polishing to see, but it does make the flow clearer in a couple of places, plus spanks a couple of goofs.
Clee
It's not always like this, but, another day and another chapter proof-read and in the queue for posting.
Still no great changes, though it now reads a bit more smoothly than it did, plus one or two goofs got stamped on.
Clee
And another, proof-read, tidied up, and in the queue.
More polishing of the prose, with not so much changed this chapter.
Clee
Freshly proof-read, this chapter is now in the queue for reposting.
This time round, there have been some real changes, nothing important, but Leri has been brought a little more in line with how she is in other chapters, not least because now I know her a lot better than I did when she helicoptered into this chapter originally. Luke's role is also a tad expanded to cover his reaction to Leri's bikini in a more cohesive manner.
No retcons, but a little amplification.
Clee
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