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I'm getting ready to post Chapter 16. It tells Harrison's ex-wife Cindy's story. The chapter turned out to be longer than I expected -Cindy had a lot to say! WARNING Those of you who are of the cheating wife = 'torch the bitch' persuasion may want to skip this chapter. As most of you know from my other stories I believe living well, especially with a new younger more beautiful (preferably richer) wife/girlfriend, is the best revenge. As always, thanks for reading and taking the time to comment and thanks to Steve for making this a better story. AA
I have been reminded that there is a difference between the spelling of the country 'Colombia' and certain cities named 'Columbia' and a few other mistakes - my haste in trying to get this chapter out is at fault. My apologies to my readers and to the citizens of 'Colombia' several of whom took the time to remind me of the differences stated! :-)
Now back to chapter 16 to figure out what kind of character ex-wife Cindy is - and to keep Natalie from running her over with the F-150.
AA
Sorry for the delay - chapter 15 became the 26-page monster that ate Cleveland! Just got it back from Steve (editor) tonight on a fast turnaround. So will post tomorrow. Thanks again Steve for making this a better story, and thanks for the comments - they keep me writing. AA
My editor Steve, cautioned me about too many characters with an example from the life of JRR Tolkien. Tolkien was reading an early edition of 'Lord of the Rings' to a group of friends, when one of them muttered 'Not another f***ing Elf!' Some of you have agreed with Steve and Tolkien's friend, and I admit there are a lot of 'Elves' in this story but they seem to push in despite my best efforts. It appears there will only be one more 'Elf,' and you will meet Doctor Aleja Vega in Chapter 15. Thanks again to all for reading my story and for taking the time to comment and I will try my best to keep the 'Elves' under control. Chapter 14 coming soon. Regards, AA
The Blog heading should read 'Sorry.' Maybe I'll take the rest of the day off!!
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