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Did you see how much money she made?
She's 23 years old !?!?!
God, what does her parents think?
Do you think daddy wanks to her pictures, watching his little princess get plowed by a hundred guys?
I want a part of that, anyone know where she sets up?
Her next trick 1000 guys oO
~ dude oO
Good story, great premise.
Basically an Isekai but desperately needs help.
With polishing could be a really good story.
Great idea, good premise, excellent description. Let down by editing. Dude, you need an editor, sorry!
It has been pointed out to me by a reader, still surprised I even have those! That I made a boo boo. In four he didn't buy the ring of warmth, but in five he has it. Tomorrow I'll edit that in four and fix it. Kudos to OmegaPet-58 for spotting that!
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