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This story is exactly what you’d expect: kid gets caught jerking off by his mom, and things escalate from there. No surprises, no deep meaning—just pure, unfiltered fantasy.
The writing is clean and well-done, which is kind of impressive for this kind of story. You can tell the author really wanted this scenario to happen when they were younger—just like a lot of us did at that age. The writing is grammatically solid and surprisingly polished—so much so that it would impress even my editor.
Thumbs up!
Just found this one recently and its getting an anime!
I went to the gym today, yes I know right, and I gotta ask. All that stretching you do, with those wonderfully tight leggings. Is that on purpose?
It’s official — my balls ache, my legs ache, and I’ve sweated worse than a worse than a pig in a bacon factory.
So, Riders is now concluded, and I am working on The New World. On top of that, I’ve joined the gym to try and lose some weight—and there might be a story in that! I went for my induction today and saw a fit-looking, mature bird doing a routine on the mat, thrusting her hips up in the air. God, I wanted to take her then and there, and I found it difficult to concentrate on what the instructor was saying. lol.
I’m glad chapter three was well received, and once again, I can only apologize for my faux pas yesterday. Sometimes my humour doesn’t always stick the landing, and yesterday was one of those days. The last thing I would want to do is upset anyone—we’ve all got enough shit going on as it is!
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