When the Heartache Is Over by StangStar06

Description: He ended our marriage with a God damned song?
Size: 170 KB ( ~ 32,237 words)
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Drunk/Drugged, Tear Jerker, Cheating, 2nd POV, Violent, Workplace

Review by Teloz   [other reviews by Teloz]

Reviewed: 2013-06-25

I'm not really into 'cheating wife' stories (that's why it only scores 9 for Appeal To Reviewer), and they seem to be 'SS06's' stock-in-trade. So how come I'm writing this review? Well, the main reason is that I don't think a score of 6.48 (at time of writing) is an adequate score for what is really an excellent story.

As always with 'SS06', When the Heartache Is Over is technically excellent, with just the odd typo, which we all know are unavoidable. No, it's the plot that makes this one different, this story isn't about hate and revenge, it's about love and remorse. If I have a quarrel at all with the story, it's the big boobies (I'm not a fan of big boobs and dicks), but in this instance, they actually have some bearing on the plot.

This story is so good, it almost made me cry in the end, but then, I'm a soppy old fart anyway, and no, I'm not going to reiterate the story here. If you want to find out what happens, the story says it all.

Read, and enjoy!

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9