Strike by Deuce

Author's Description:
This could be sci-fi, or fantasy or mind control '" you decide! See if you can spot the hook before I set it deep in you. Where did this come from? I don't know.
Size: 145 KB ( ~ 27,496 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, Group Sex, Safe Sex, Oral Sex, Anal Sex

Review by pj   [other reviews by pj]

Reviewed: 2011-12-13

This is a typical adult male fantasy, but with a twist.

An older man has the bad luck to break down on a freeway in a thunderstorm, and worse to be struck by lightning putting him in a coma. Next thing he knows, the ICU night nurses are using him as a fuck doll... and paying for the ride.

And that's just the beginning of the adventure. His physical aging has rapidly reversed and he's now a hung hunk with superpowers.

A great fast moving yarn with a twist at the end that will cause some to groan but others, like me, to think: "I'd buy that for a dollar!" MC, MFFFFF and then some.

If you are put off by poor formatting and the occasional typo, bad punctuation or continuity break, you might not care for it. If you can get by all that and want a good story from a story-teller, you will probably like it as much as I did.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 7 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10