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Cassie's Birthday by Old Fart

Author's Description:
Cassie's turning 16. And you know what that means. No sex but there is an enema scene.
Size: 10 KB ( ~ 1,896 words)
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Teenagers, Caution

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed: 2007-07-19

Tradition is a good part of a real family's memories as the children grow up, and these memories are passed along to the next generation with all the fond memories of reaching that mysterious age when you are expected to leave childish things behind you and to start on becoming an adult.
Cassie, our heroine has reached that wonderful milestone, her sixteenth nirthday!
To prepare this delightful child for her initiation her mother starts off with an enema, and then a douche, in preparation for her big family party.
Daddy helps by positioning her face down on the dining room table and slipping off her dress and panties, leaving her at the mercy of the sixteen uncles and cousins, and Daddy, the "one for luck!"
Old Fart tells us that this was one of two tales he wrote in response to a challenge, and in his own way writes a story which leads one to use one's imagination!

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10