Seduced by my Boss by R

Description: A quiet, arerage, guy works in an office with a female boss. One morning his boring life is changed forever when he has an encounter in the parking garage with his boss.
Size: 11 KB ( ~ 2,086 words)
Type: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Blackmail, MaleDom, FemaleDom, Oral Sex, Cream Pie

Review by Andrew Johns   [other reviews by Andrew Johns]

Reviewed: 2007-06-21

In "Seduced by my Boss", we have the story of a young man who has long fantasized about his boss, and catches a glimpse of her pantyless crotch as she gets out of her car. She catches him staring, and takes matters into her own hands, at least initially.

The sex in this story is not bad, but not great. The switch from FDom to MDom in such a short story is more difficult to accept happening.

The plot itself is pretty to the point, and works for a short stroke story.

Technically, this story is not very well written. Two people speaking in the same paragraph. The changing viewpoint from third person to first, and back again, was jarring.

This could have been a hot story, but the technical problems really were a detraction from the stroke value. I can't recommend this story in its current state. If it was run through an editor, it would make for decent stroke.

Plot: 7 | Technical Quality: 4 | Appeal to Reviewer: 4