Buxton was like any other small town anywhere in the world. You knew everybody and their business and everybody knew you and your business. I'd lived here all my teenage life and had gained a reputaion. One the guys capitalised on... the women... well. I had to get out of here, and when I was offered a job in a large hotel in the big city, I jumped at the chance... but did things really change?
Size: 32 KB ( ~ 6,068 words)
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Heterosexual
Lisa has a real talent for creating characters you know you've met. I always want to know more about what is going on in a character's head and in this story Lisa does a great job of showing how a career might start. The stroke value is very high and the story flows very nicely. I'm especially impressed with the mood she creates around the story. I can see the places and the action. As in any good story, I'm sorry to see the end, but yet I didn't feel the story was incomplete.
Good job and I hope you'll post more stories here.
Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10