Lisa has a real talent for creating characters you know you've met. I always want to know more about what is going on in a character's head and in this story Lisa does a great job of showing how a career might start. The stroke value is very high and the story flows very nicely. I'm especially impressed with the mood she creates around the story. I can see the places and the action. As in any good story, I'm sorry to see the end, but yet I didn't feel the story was incomplete.
Good job and I hope you'll post more stories here.