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The gigantic nuclear submarine Retvizan is cruising off the Azores on its last training cruise before mothballing. Suddenly, their communication with the outside world fails. Surfacing, the startled commander discovers something else. They appear to be in the wrong ocean.
Size: 281 KB (49,876 words)
Genre: Time Travel
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Science Fiction, Time Travel

Review by pairadice   [other reviews by pairadice]

Reviewed:


Sail with the Retvizan in an unknown world in an unknown future! This is a great adventure story that also deals with relationships but without the usual graphic sexual descriptions. The writing is good enough that one feels the intimacy without having to get graphic about it. Relationships are well developed, not only with the sexual component but with every day life.

All in all, a well crafted story that makes one eager for the next chapter.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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