The Master's Project (7) - Randy And Kathy by Lubrican

Author's Description:
Bob met Randy and Kathy by accident - literally. As happens sometimes, that led to a relationship that got closer. and closer. and closer, until it was absolutely incredible how close they got. The project had made an amazing difference in Bob's life, but he wasn't prepared for this.
Size: 82 KB ( ~ 15,550 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Reluctant, Heterosexual, Incest, Brother, Sister, Oral Sex, Masturbation, Pregnancy

Review by Andrew Johns   [other reviews by Andrew Johns]

Reviewed: 2006-12-08

In this 7th installment of BOB's "The Master's Project" series, we have the story of Randy and Kathy, a couple that is deeply in love with each other. They are introduced to Bob when Kathy accidently but literally bumps into Bob with her car. Bob ends up in the hospital, with a frantically worried Kathy hanging over him, and then meets Randy, her husband. Upon being released, they begin a friendship that grows into the unexpected.

The stroke value of this story was pretty good, and if incest really gets you going, it could make you very hot indeed.

The plot in this story is very well done. There is lots of subtle and not so subtle foreshadowing of how the things will turn out in the end. And, Bob's often incoherent thoughts both after the accident and when things come together in his head make for great scenes.

Technically, the story is quite well written, though there were a few typos in the original posting that appear to have been cleaned up. Some of the spots has Bob thinking in run-on sentences, but they are intentionally done to show how cluttered his thoughts are at the time. They make for nice touches in the full scheme of things.

I enjoyed this episode in this series, and I didn't fully see it coming. Randy and Kathy I had figured out, but I didn't see how Bob eventually fit into things. And I am glad I didn't, because it made the story that much more fun.

While not my favorite of this series, it really is a good one.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9