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The Master's Project (4) - Hiram And Mildred by Lubrican

Author's Description:
Hiram and Mildred were stuck in the 1920's, captives of a tradition that would make the Puritans proud. When they asked Bob to help save their marriage, they had no idea what they were going to get. Who'd have thought that you could introduce the concept of marital pleasure by watching Walt Disney movies?
Size: 103 KB ( ~ 19,532 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Reluctant, Heterosexual, Oral Sex, Masturbation, Petting, Pregnancy, Slow

Review by Andrew Johns   [other reviews by Andrew Johns]

Reviewed: 2006-11-03 - (Review Updated: 2006-11-03)

In his fourth installment of "The Master's Project", BOB treats us tot he story of Hiram and Mildred, as well as Mildred's sister, Gertrude. The couple has been stuck seemingly in a time warp from the 1900's, and knows nothing of the basic pleasures of life, much less the carnal ones. Read along as Bob helps them out.

The sex in the story was pretty good. It wasn't as hot as some of the other stories that BOB has written, but it again fit the story well. BOB has become very gifted in writing sex that fits the story, instead of sex that overwhelms it.

The plot itself is very nicely crafted, and told with a deft touch. Watching the couple come forward to the 20th century was fun, and seeing their sexual growth was nice, too.

Technically, there was only one flaw that I noticed, using "to" instead of "too". Other than that, it was crisp and clean.

I really enjoyed this story, to the point that the sex became almost secondary. Much of it happens off screen between Hiram and Mildred, and we mostly see Bob's interaction with Gertrude. While that was nice, the story itself was better.

I definitely recommend this, but not as stroke. Read it for the good story.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10