Kelly's mischievous behaviour finally catches up with her. It was up to me to show her the error of her ways. (Please note this is a little rougher than my usual fare - be warned.)
Size: 36 KB (6,834 words)
Genre: BDSM
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/ft, Teenagers, Consensual, Reluctant, Heterosexual, DomSub, MaleDom, Spanking, Rough, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Masturbation, Sex Toys
Review by Andrew Johns [other reviews by Andrew Johns]
Reviewed:
In "Under The Bridge", we have the story of a man who decides he's had enough teasing from a young woman, and she needs to be taken with force.
The sex in this story is fairly rough and extremely intense, which the author does warn about. It also speaks well to a Dominant's fantasies.
The plot itself is fairly straight forward. You are given just enough to get a sense of both characters, and then you are thrown into the whirlwind that is their sexual encounter. This works well as a stroke piece.
Technically, there really wasn't anything wrong with the story, though I wasn't aware that the British spelling of "tires" was "tyres", and that kind of threw me out. But since it is a valid spelling, I can't fault the author for that. Still, it broke my immersion just a bit, since I'm not British, and was unexpected.
Overall, I really liked this short story by SirNathan. He is one of my favorite authors, as he gives a much better insight into real BDSM activities than most authors do. This encounter is more fantasy BDSM, since there is much less development of the relationship that you would normally expect. I view this story as intense BDSM stroke without going too far to make it not possible.
If you like BDSM stories and want a quick hit of something intense, you won't go wrong with this one. This really hit me hard in a good way, and is the kind of fantasy BDSM my mind wanders into on its own.
