Fraternization: The Next Day by Patricia51


Description: Sequel to Fraternization. PFC Kelly Wooten and Lieutenant Mark Ashe struggle to keep their romance a secret with the help of some friends.
Size: 29 KB ( ~ 5,499 words)
Type: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic, True Story, Military

Review by Daniellekitten   [other reviews by Daniellekitten]

Reviewed: 2006-06-07


I can't help myself. I love this woman's work. She's absolutely perfect. I read and reviewed the first part of this story and when I saw she'd provided a sequeal, I think I actually squealed myself in joy. As an ex Airman, I really enjoyed the military aspects of this story as well as the no PDA rules.

Patty managed to put a lot of emotion and fun into this story which made me smile.

The stroke ratio is high as well as the plot and quality, it's an all around wonderful story and well worth the time it takes to read.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10