A stranger delivers a briefcase full of cash and a fantastic story about time travel and riches to a surprised youth heading home from school. Here the youth tells you how he, step by step, sinks deeper into the strange reality where people are actively hunting him and the girls that become part of his life, in many ways... This is the story of how he assumed the alias Nemo, and as such it is the very beginning of his long adventures.
Size: 136 KB (26,474 words)
Incomplete and Inactive
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: mt/Fa, Mult, Consensual, Time Travel, Group Sex
Review by The Night Hawk [other reviews by The Night Hawk]
Reviewed:
Okay, six chapters in and a hope of a finished story.
I generally avoid doing serials in progress, but this one shows such promise.
Yes, there is sex in the story but it could have easily been left out and the story could possibly make it mainstream... If people still bought books.
My reason for doing a review now was based on a premise put forth by some of the greatest scientists in history. If we could travel back in time, or forward for that matter, we could change little things, but major events would have to occur or the fabric of our universe would be destroyed.
The author handles this quite well and explains it in terms that even non science oriented people will understand.
I will follow this story closely and suggest you do the same. If the story gets completed, I will update my review of it.
As it stands now, it is a winner!
