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Worth Waiting For? by Anna Starr

Author's Description:
Is real life stranger than fiction? Can an erotic fantisy become reality? Or is it all a dream?
Size: 11 KB ( ~ 2,086 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Heterosexual, Oral Sex, Doctor/Nurse, Slow

Review by Stormy Weather   [other reviews by Stormy Weather]

Reviewed: 2005-11-28

This is a well constructed story about a young woman who goes in for her physical... the one most females dread. The exam turns into an interesting tryst; and the reader wonders exactly what the outcome of this whole affair will be.

I was disappointed at the ending. I feel that such a strong story could/should have had a better conclusion.

There were a few things grammatically that could use a bit of work; and in at least one instance, the view point changed.

Over all, though, this a good story for a first timer here at SOL and I hope to see more stories from Anna.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8