This is a well constructed story about a young woman who goes in for her physical... the one most females dread. The exam turns into an interesting tryst; and the reader wonders exactly what the outcome of this whole affair will be.
I was disappointed at the ending. I feel that such a strong story could/should have had a better conclusion.
There were a few things grammatically that could use a bit of work; and in at least one instance, the view point changed.
Over all, though, this a good story for a first timer here at SOL and I hope to see more stories from Anna.