I never know where my keys are, but Steve certainly knows where his are and how to use them! This is a well rounded, detailed, erotic, fantasy, where the narrator speaks directly to the female readers; however, the stroke potential is also there for you guys!
One thing that cut through the flow of things was the usage of the: ... but that may just be a personal hitch with me and doesn't bother anyone else.
And some of the details were maybe a bit over done regarding the scenery.
Otherwise I give it up a thumbs up!