Do you have the keys? by Steve

Author's Description:
An Erotic Short Story about two lovers lost in each others presence and deeply captivated by one another's love... totally oblivious to the world around them.
Size: 14 KB ( ~ 2,655 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, Fiction, Oral Sex, Exhibitionism

Review by Stormy Weather   [other reviews by Stormy Weather]

Reviewed: 2005-11-21

I never know where my keys are, but Steve certainly knows where his are and how to use them! This is a well rounded, detailed, erotic, fantasy, where the narrator speaks directly to the female readers; however, the stroke potential is also there for you guys!

One thing that cut through the flow of things was the usage of the: ... but that may just be a personal hitch with me and doesn't bother anyone else.

And some of the details were maybe a bit over done regarding the scenery.

Otherwise I give it up a thumbs up!

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10