It's a vast government conspiracy ! ! ! The whole thing is just a messed up plan of the governemnet attempting to be all/know all/God like and getting slapped down for their efforts to mess with Mother Nature.
Let's see, super human, teleporting, mind reading and the guys in black hats that think they are the good guys. This is a stick it to the jerks who messed with us story that actually works!
Enogh of the fun stuff. This is a very well written story. The plot line was we thought out and the execusion is quite good.
I can find nothing wrong with the technique and the mechanics of this. The author knows how to use a spell check and grammer check and what a proper sentence looks like.