Prototype Ten by Shakes Peer2B

Author's Description:
After Will lost his family in a terrorist bombing, he joined a secret 'super soldier' program in hopes of exacting revenge on the terrorists, but the experiment went horribly awry. Will, as one of the few survivors, must now find his own way to his goal...
Size: 300 KB ( ~ 56,889 words)
Genre: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Science Fiction

Review by Threesheets   [other reviews by Threesheets]

Reviewed: 2007-11-15

It's a vast government conspiracy ! ! ! The whole thing is just a messed up plan of the governemnet attempting to be all/know all/God like and getting slapped down for their efforts to mess with Mother Nature.

Let's see, super human, teleporting, mind reading and the guys in black hats that think they are the good guys. This is a stick it to the jerks who messed with us story that actually works!

Enogh of the fun stuff. This is a very well written story. The plot line was we thought out and the execusion is quite good.

I can find nothing wrong with the technique and the mechanics of this. The author knows how to use a spell check and grammer check and what a proper sentence looks like.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10