The Temptation and The Result by Tabooteller


Description: Man endures huge temptation, once home decides he missed out, then is glad he did miss it.
Size: 52 KB ( ~ 9,861 words)
Type:
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic, First, Anal Sex, Exhibitionism

Review by Andrew Johns   [other reviews by Andrew Johns]

Reviewed: 2006-03-07


In "The Temptation and The Result", we read about a married man that is tempted by a woman he met at a gym to cheat on his wife. The woman goes so far as to offer up her ass, something the man's wife has refused him. He declines her, and goes home to his wife, who is in a foul mood. Read on to see how it unfolds.

The sex in this story is not bad, but it also isn't very hot. There is a certain amount of "cheesy" factor that keeps it from boiling over.

The story plot itself was only average. But the characters themselves were poor. The wife had no reason to be mean to her husband; she just was. The woman that teased (and several other friends off-screen) all took a shot at the husband over a minor comment from the wife, which is a stretch by any means. Nothing really made sense.

Technically, it was pretty poor. Mispelled words, improper punctuation and grammar, two people speaking in the same paragraph, and paragraphs with more than one topic ran roughshod over the plot.

Without all the technical problems, this story would be of average interest. As it is, it is below average. I failed to like any of the characters, and failed to find the sex hot.

I don't recommend this story.

Plot: 4 | Technical Quality: 6 | Appeal to Reviewer: 5