Rain by Mat Twassel


Description: "An orgasm is "like winning all the Nintendo games at once." Those words are spoken by an 18-year old girl to an 11-year-old boy while both of them are watching from seclusion as two couples make it on the nearby beach
Size: 11 KB ( ~ 2,086 words)
Type:
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: First

Review by Celeste   [other reviews by Celeste]

Reviewed: 2003-06-23


"An orgasm is "like winning all the Nintendo games at once." Those words are spoken by an 18-year old girl to an 11-year-old boy while both of them are watching from seclusion as two couples make it on the nearby beach. The author has taken the story entitled "Rain" by Mark Aster, which I reviewed in the last issue of CR, and has introduced the perspective of the young boy and the other girl watching from a nearby sand dune. I don't want to tell you much more about the story; you should read it for yourself. It's a really sensitive and sexy story of emerging sexuality. Although its title is "Rain," it's listed in the postings as "More Rain."

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10