Concubines by E. Z. Riter

Description: Which is more giving and loving, more submssive and needy, a woman born and bred to be a concubine or a woman who knows it in her heart?
Size: 93 KB ( ~ 17,636 words)
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, BDSM, DomSub, MaleDom, Humiliation, Harem

Review by Bobster   [other reviews by Bobster]

Reviewed: 2009-10-30

A great read! I enjoy a lot of what E.Z. Riter writes, and this story was very good. Too short however, the ending felt like he had tired or writing it and just chopped it off. Perhaps a sequel is in the works at some point?

More BD than D/s and I tend to prefer the true D/s slant, but it was well done and not over the top. The sex was hot and plentiful and it was coded correctly. No hidden surprises.

Its a quick read with just enough meat in terms of length to get you involved. Some of the dialog and scenes seemed a little forced or unrealistic, but overall well worth a go!

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9

Review by fuzzywuzzy   [other reviews by fuzzywuzzy]

Reviewed: 2006-01-03

Concubines, by E.Z.Riter, is the wonderfully descriptive story of a young Texas millionaire who befriends the son of a Sultan, and is given a concubine by the Sultan in gratitude for saving his eldest son's life in an assassination attempt.

Kamilah is the epitome of what a concubine should be, and allows Mike to satisfy his awakening urges to be a DOM.

Amanda Abigail Beavers seems to be a prudish woman who is in fact a total submissive who becomes Mike's second conquest as a concubine. This is the story of her subsequent total domination by this young man whose father and grandfather also owned Harems. Amanda becomes Samirah, and because of her initial refusal to submit very nearly has a forced clitorectomy as her final discipline before her Master. Thank heavens she finally admits to her place in life, and joins her Master in Texas with her 'sister' where presumably they live happy ever after!

The bondage scenes, and the humiliation of Amanda, are exciting, and should have a separate story grading with the stroke amount.

E. Z. Riter has a vicious pen and I have not come across one story I didn't like. So There!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10