Atlanta by Mtnz

Author's Description:
After a drunken night we make love in the morning. First of the Atlanta series.
Size: 7 KB ( ~ 1,327 words)
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, True Story, Anal Sex, Fisting

Review by Vinnie Tesla   [other reviews by Vinnie Tesla]

Reviewed: 2002-03-16

A man awakens in a hotel room after a night of debauchery. He fingers the woman there with him, fucks her, fists her, and fucks her ass. They go to the bathroom, and then she fucks him. The end. Furthermore, it's all told in the second person—a dangrous indulgence.

What makes this story stand out is the warmth and vividness of the prose. "I rub my nose into your shoulder and smell you - a delicious mix of you, your hair and a sweet morning funk." Despite the limitations of its scope, the people in this story feel real—they had lives before and after the events described.

This appears to be only Mtnz's second story, but he's a talent to watch.

Plot: 3 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10