Unintended Consequences by Banadin

Description: The unintended consequences of taking reader advice by a new author.
Size: 5 KB ( ~ 948 words)
Type: Humor
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Humor

Review by manddscott   [other reviews by manddscott]

Reviewed: 2016-05-04

Pure sarcasm and humor make this short work worth the few minutes it takes to read. It helps put us critics/readers/reviewers in our place, and reminds us that an author's work is just that, his/her own. It is one thing to suggest corrections to grammar and punctuation or spelling, but another altogether to start messing with a story's plot.

As short as it was, it still gets an A (8) for plot and appeal, along with an A+ (9) for technical score.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8