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Candida, and How She Caught My Eye, and Then Me by Pettybox

Author's Description:
A chance meeting at a night club catches two unlikely people not exactly searching for love and a relationship. Both being careful of being burned, they tiptoe their way to a solid love affair. Sexy!
Size: 155 KB ( ~ 29,393 words)
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Fiction, Safe Sex, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Masturbation, Sex Toys

Review by Vitruvian Manuel   [other reviews by Vitruvian Manuel]

Reviewed: 2015-01-09

I really wanted to like this story. I've liked some of the author's previous work, and the eneral out line of the story was right up my alley. However, it turned out to be repetitive, a bit trite, and in need of editing and proofing.

The Bad:

A bit trite. Many points are unnevessarily made repeatedly. Some events and talking points are visited repeatedly. No sense of time passing; the author tells us, "and this all happened x months later".

The good:

The two main characters are likeable and have some depth. The general storyline is good and different from many. Acceptable ending.

The last call:

If you are still waiting for your serials to update, there's no reason not to read this.

Plot: 7 | Technical Quality: N/A | Appeal to Reviewer: 6