Kayla's Deal by oyster50


Description: Kayla got tired of being single. She has an idea of how to get some of the things she wants without having to jump through the hoops of 'normal' social interactions. She calls somebody she's known for a long time and proposes a deal.
Size: 23 KB ( ~ 4,361 words)
Type: Romantic
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Fiction, Oral Sex, Petting, Cream Pie, BBW

Review by Lugh   [other reviews by Lugh]

Reviewed: 2014-11-18


Full of surprises, with an unusual stream-of-consciousness writing style that works well. The plot isn't complex, but that works with the stream-of-consciousness style.

As a new reviewer, I hope I can distinguish between something well done in a story even if it's not to my personal taste. That does seem to work here. My first attraction isn't to the Rubenesque sort of woman, but the male protagonist certainly does appreciate that, and, in spite of the woman's insecurities, makes it pleasant for both.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8