The original version of this story drew some of the lowest scores and harshest comments I've ever received. Instead of deleting the original and writing it off, I decided to do a rewrite. If you read the first story, please read this one and let me know if it's any better, or if the whole concept just sucks rocks.
Peter's smart, beautiful girlfriend is just perfect for him. All he needs to do was convince his disapproving daughter. A trip to the family farm should do the trick. But his daughter has other ideas.
Paili & Darissa are bored with being seniors in High School, getting straight A's in Honors Courses and being star athletes. Both have been accepted to prestigious colleges. Out of boredom, on the one's 18th birthday, the two ladies devise and act on a plan so sinister, an entire city of people is turned on, falling in love or plain infuriated with them.