This was cathartic to write, mainly in narrative form, with some poetic licence thrown in for interest. Unlike me, he is likable and you have to sympathise, even if you don’t agree with his attitudes and point’s of view. Some historic timing is out to allow the story to flow.
This is my rewritten,augmented and edited story --Torn lives--. I have to thank two people. My editor Johnny Galt who with his constant prodding, questions and suggestions made that the story changed for the better and I'm also in debt to fellow author CPBaudelaire who the 03/14/12 wrote a number of suggestions to improve the story in his comment to Torn Lives. To both of them many thanks. Fermpera
Follow chief Eddie Nolan, as he continues to deal with his professional and homelife after his recent deployment. The changes in his wife, Carol are interesting. His children and their actions. Welcoming his son, Edward into the Nolan family. An important decision regarding his retirement.
Michelle and Amanda work together for their exams. Only, it seems that work is not the only thing on Amanda's mind. Michelle, though, has never... well, I'm sure you'll find it more interesting to read about it. ;-)
A true story of love found, love lost, and love found again. The experience was uplifting for me, and I hope it brings hope to those who have lost loves of their own. There is hope, and it can be as good as it ever was.
A boy leaves home and joins the Navy, because he is in love with his mother. He returns a man to find his mother and little sister are in love with him. They become the perfect family.