It got his attention. (Note - several readers have asked me to repost this story as it seemed to get lost when the site went down a little while back).
This story is a parody of the Encyclopedia Brown mysteries. I'd be the first person to admit that I can't write short two or three page mysteries the way Donal J. Sobol does, but at least I can take his characters, age them a few years, and then put them in adult/sexual situations. This should be a fairly short story for me, and after it's done I'll start working on a new Ben 10 story or another Jason story, but in the meantime enjoy this one.
Imagine a Mirror Universe where many things are the same, (the same people, the same technology, etc.) but no one has ever had sex or any kind of intimacy beyond hand-holding. Everyone is a virgin, relationships between spouses are purely platonic. How do they breed you say? They use gestation machines! This is the crazy upside-down world that Steve Wilson accidentally ends up in when he tries to use a time machine to go back and save his mom from a fatal car accident.
When Alison's brother Ted comes to stay with her and her husband she finds a surprising sexual tension growing between them. Will they be able to resist during her husband's business trips?
When Angie's parents divorced, she went with her mother and her brother Frank went with their dad and she didn't see them for years. Now that she's off to grad school where her father teaches it's time to get to know her father and brother all over again.