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About Teloz:
An Englishman and proud of it, I've been an avid reader since I first learned to read. I've written much and published little, mainly because I'm my own worst critic, though I did edit a parish magazine for four and a half years, writing regular articles, and editorials.

I rarely recap the story in my reviews, the reader should have read the blurb first, so no point reiterating it, and anyway, the author should have composed the blurb to hook the reader in the first place. In a review, what I feel about the story is what's important.

I try never to let cultural differences affect my review, I know some people can't help it if they can't spell 'colour', or they call a 'lift' an 'elevator'. Luckily, I speak, and read, fluent American!

Just as an aside, talking about the authors blurb, one of the best ways to turn me off a story is to put up a blurb riddled with misspellings, lack of capitalisation, or poor grammar. If you want to sell your story to a reader, the blurb needs as much attention as the whole thing. Just remember APPPP! (A proper précis pulls the punter!)
  Story Title Author Name Review Date P Q A
Ashley and Milo happyhugo 10 9 10
All the King's Horses Shrink42 10 9 10
Akkadian Statuette zaliterr 9 9 10
A Benign Something JT Malone 10 9 10
I'll Dance at Your Wedding (Revised) Stultus 9 5 9
I'll be a Mommy's Uncle! DiscipleN 10 8 10
Heart of the Wood Les Lumens 10 9 10
Blue Lagoon - Book II Eradinus 10 9 10
The New Employee lordshipmayhem 10 9 10
Every Summer Dual Writer 9 7 9
Pierced JetBoy 10 9 10
State of Chaos EzzyB 10 9 10
Epigraphy zaliterr 10 9 10
Paul's Redemption novascriptus 9 7 10
Old Man Old Fart 9 8 10
And I'll Show You Mine JetBoy 10 9 10
Claire and Angie's Holiday Adventure The Smiths 8 8 10
Numbers ExtrusionUK 10 9 10
Chronicles ExtrusionUK 10 8 10
Chance Janna Leonard 9 9 10
Camping Losgud 10 9 10
A Circumstantial Case jake60 9 9 10
A Child's Christmas Mat Twassel 10 9 10
A Chef's Journey Allan Joyal 9 7 10
A Change in Rebecca Vulgus 10 8 10
The Bitch and the Jerk Horace Baldwin 9 9 9
Bec BarBar 10 9 10
Beachcombing Ersatz 10 9 10
P: Plot | Q: Technical Qualities | A: Appeal to Reviewer
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