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Hi All
I'm still in the process of doing rewrites of several stories that I posted before. This time the story is "A Plan Comes Together".
It seemed to me that I created a few loose ends. In the rewrite, I think I closed those.
I hope that you enjoy it and thank you for your readership of my stuff, good and really bad.
Mick
Hi All
I got a lot of feedback on "Surprise!" almost all of it had to do with the fact that I messed it up. People couldn't tell who was speaking when and so I have done a rewrite and have posted the story again.
For those of you who corrected me, thank you and please read the story and if it is worthy re-score it.
Thanks for caring enough to comment and for your readership.
Mick
Hi All
I posted "Surprise!" a couple of days ago. I was very tired and I think the tequila did some of the editing.
I have paid attention to some of the comments, and the corrections were spot on, so I have reposted the story! Let's see if this works better.
At this point I know I said it was a flash story, but I'm thinking there might be another chapter in me....somewhere....someplace....maybe.
Later
Mick
Hi All
Hey, I was going to post a bonus story for Easter, but got it and chapter 10 of The Strawberry Patch reversed.
Rather than cause issues, I let Ch 10 post today and the Bonus Story - The Wives Descriptions - will post Sunday. The wives description, is just that. Several readers have asked about them, so I wrote this flash piece.
Have a blessed holiday weekend be it Easter or Passover.
Mick
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