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Hi All
Some amazing responses to this little stinking story. Two descended into the scummy dregs of politics. I would hope that both of you would no longer dishonor anything I write with your readership.
Some people went nuts as to the legality of Mick's actions. It's a freaking fictional story! In my fictional world, bad guys get what they deserve.
Only one intelligent response! "I wonder what she will choose to do?"
That was the final thought I wanted to leave with readers. Will she chose to be in, and face her husbands ire, or out and lose him forever.
If those of you that didn't care for it, write your own ending!
But most of all, in the end, remember that my work is worth exactly what you pay for it.
Thank you for your readership.
Except for those two a-holes.
Mick
Hi All
I'm still in the process of doing rewrites of several stories that I posted before. This time the story is "A Plan Comes Together".
It seemed to me that I created a few loose ends. In the rewrite, I think I closed those.
I hope that you enjoy it and thank you for your readership of my stuff, good and really bad.
Mick
Hi All
I got a lot of feedback on "Surprise!" almost all of it had to do with the fact that I messed it up. People couldn't tell who was speaking when and so I have done a rewrite and have posted the story again.
For those of you who corrected me, thank you and please read the story and if it is worthy re-score it.
Thanks for caring enough to comment and for your readership.
Mick
Hi All
I posted "Surprise!" a couple of days ago. I was very tired and I think the tequila did some of the editing.
I have paid attention to some of the comments, and the corrections were spot on, so I have reposted the story! Let's see if this works better.
At this point I know I said it was a flash story, but I'm thinking there might be another chapter in me....somewhere....someplace....maybe.
Later
Mick
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