Writer Mick: Blog

Hi All

I'm still in the process of doing rewrites of several stories that I posted before. This time the story is "A Plan Comes Together".

It seemed to me that I created a few loose ends. In the rewrite, I think I closed those.

I hope that you enjoy it and thank you for your readership of my stuff, good and really bad.

Mick

Hi All

I got a lot of feedback on "Surprise!" almost all of it had to do with the fact that I messed it up. People couldn't tell who was speaking when and so I have done a rewrite and have posted the story again.

For those of you who corrected me, thank you and please read the story and if it is worthy re-score it.

Thanks for caring enough to comment and for your readership.

Mick

Hi All

I posted "Surprise!" a couple of days ago. I was very tired and I think the tequila did some of the editing.

I have paid attention to some of the comments, and the corrections were spot on, so I have reposted the story! Let's see if this works better.

At this point I know I said it was a flash story, but I'm thinking there might be another chapter in me....somewhere....someplace....maybe.

Later

Mick

Hi All

Hey, I was going to post a bonus story for Easter, but got it and chapter 10 of The Strawberry Patch reversed.

Rather than cause issues, I let Ch 10 post today and the Bonus Story - The Wives Descriptions - will post Sunday. The wives description, is just that. Several readers have asked about them, so I wrote this flash piece.

Have a blessed holiday weekend be it Easter or Passover.

Mick

Hi All

Having an editor work with me for the past few stories has been wonderful!

The experience of finishing Xalir's DreamWeaver and now having someone check my work on The Strawberry Patch Book 3 has inspired me to go back and check my earlier stories with fresh eyes and a more discerning style of writing.

I just reposted "Don't Get Mad" and it seems to flow better and is less clunky than the original. I feel like a modern man redoing the things a neanderthal had done.

I'll post notices here everytime I finish a redo of a story. If you have the time and inkling to read the stories over again, feel free to comment on the upgraded story.

Except for that "You STILL suck" thing.

Mick