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Hi All
I forgot to turn on the comments. It is on now so let me have it!
I glanced at the post and the italicized stuff didn't come out right. I'll try to get that fixed.
I dropped Windows and Office in favor of Linux and LibreOffice.
Please leave your comments and be gentle.
Mick
Hi All
The working title was "The Shit Hits The Fan" and when you read the first part, you will understand why. Then my muse took off and here we are!
A new story in four parts, but all posted at the same time. I had no editor for this one, so if you find errors it's all your fault.
I hope you enjoy this and thank you again for your readership and your support over the years.
Mick
Hi All
The rewrite is posted! I hope you will give Chapter 4 a read and see if I finished it off on a better manner.
Mick
Hi Kids!
Well I asked and you replied.
First, those who said that I should do my thing unfettered my the thoughts of my readers, thanks, but a writer writes for two. Him/her self and those who read. I mean would Shakespeare or Gordon Johnson be who they are if no one read them?
When many people tell you that you are dead, you should consider laying down. And when many commentators tell you that the story was really good until the ending, then a writer should look at the ending.
I did. I made some changes to the first three chapters and completely rewrote the end of the last chapter to better tie up the many loose ends that I left dangling. I know that even my lady readers don't like dangling loose ends!
I have submitted all four chapters to Laz to post, so they should be out there as soon as "He Who Must Be Obeyed" gets them up and running.
Thank you again for your readership and your comments.
Mick
Hi All
Goodness! The comments have been really interesting.
I have to admit that when I wrote the beginning for the first chapter, my idea was to write four different endings.
There was going to be one for the BTB fans. One for the cuckold fans. One for the Scorched earth fans. And one that was going to be a twisted Mick finish.
Thanks to all who have commented. Even those who will give the story a 1 score when the ending doesn't fit their ilk.
Mick
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