Writer Mick: Blog

Hi All

Today I edited and fixed the mess that was "A Cheating, Piece Of Shit, Slut". I was a little thing I wrote a year ago in November. Again with no one to check my spelling or my poor use of the English language, it was full of errors.

Today, I watched the KC Chiefs opening pre-season game while reading and fixing the story. I also had a very nice dish of sauteed garlic and mushrooms and a bowl of edamame and a nice local beer.

I'm pretty happy with the changes and feel that the story now had more of the humor I had in my head when I originally wrote it.

Also, Chapter 26 of "The Strawberry Patch Book 3" is ready to post in the morning

Thanks to those of you who choose to read my efforts and who make comments.

Mick

Hi All Again

A while back, I got a totally silly idea and wrote a story about a drop of sweat making an agonizingly slow journey down a girls back finally ending in her butt crack.

I had, what I thought was, an interesting twist at the end. I figured it was going to be a funny WTF finish.

However, some of you didn't care for it at all and it languished down in the 5 point range, but today it burst into the 6 range with a magnificent 6.05 score!

Thank you for your readership and your vote!

Mick

Hi All

Well today I finished the rewrite of "Another Dark And Stormy Night" and even if I do say so myself, it made the story better and I found one continuity error as well and a few spelling errors. Remember I had no editor back then.

So the redone chapters (3-11) should be posted in the morning. I hope that you will fight through the first several chapters, since I did write in a rather unconventional manner as I built the story.

I'm going to be working on some others starting tomorrow.

Thanks for reading and for your comments

Mick

Hi All

I just posted the first two chapters of the rewrite of "Another Dark And Stormy Night".

There were some things n te wording that I was just not happy with and last night I fixed them, I think. Over the next week I'll read and fix other things that I may find and, hopefully, make reading it a more enjoyable event.

Thanks again for your readership, and for your comments

Mick

Hi All!

Well after a little mishap with two 50lb boxes of human blood falling off of my delivery truck and landing on me, causing me to really mess up my MCL, my muse took me on an alternate path.

I picked back up on my rewriting of previous, unedited stories. So I have submitted "The Butt Of Choice", "You Are NOT The Father", "In Or Out", and Strike Four" for Laz to post on Monday. I amazed at how much I had to rewrite. My style has really grown since June 2018.

I hope you will read the stories, either for the first time or to check out just how rough my writing used to be!

Oh! By the way, a few of the last shorter stories that I recently posted really set off some folks. I have been writing those stories to see if I could touch the readers. In some cases I pissed some folks off and in the same story I had great positive comments.

One more thing, thank you to all who have been voting for The Strawberry Patch Book 3 - Life On The Savannah. It has been holding just over 8 on Laz's scoring system and there just aren't many stories as short as SP B3 with scores in the 8's.

Thanks to all of you for your readership and your comments.

Mick