Writer Mick: Blog

Hi All

I asked for it and I got it. I went ahead and did a big rewrite and have posted them today.

I received several fairly comprehensive bits of critique and one offer to edit my stories, other than The Strawberry Patch, where Askepot has been putting up with my poor excuse for writing for the past eight months.

I've posted what I think are the needed changes. If the one volunteer does, indeed, take on editing my stand a lone stories, then I'll post the story one last time after he, or she, has perfected it.

I'm sorry for posting this POS. I really like the stories concept and now that I've cleaned it up, I see at least two or three sequels that could get my muses attention.

Happy reading all

Mick

Hi All

I forgot to turn on the comments. It is on now so let me have it!

I glanced at the post and the italicized stuff didn't come out right. I'll try to get that fixed.

I dropped Windows and Office in favor of Linux and LibreOffice.

Please leave your comments and be gentle.

Mick

Hi All

The working title was "The Shit Hits The Fan" and when you read the first part, you will understand why. Then my muse took off and here we are!

A new story in four parts, but all posted at the same time. I had no editor for this one, so if you find errors it's all your fault.

I hope you enjoy this and thank you again for your readership and your support over the years.

Mick

Hi All

The rewrite is posted! I hope you will give Chapter 4 a read and see if I finished it off on a better manner.

Mick

Hi Kids!

Well I asked and you replied.

First, those who said that I should do my thing unfettered my the thoughts of my readers, thanks, but a writer writes for two. Him/her self and those who read. I mean would Shakespeare or Gordon Johnson be who they are if no one read them?

When many people tell you that you are dead, you should consider laying down. And when many commentators tell you that the story was really good until the ending, then a writer should look at the ending.

I did. I made some changes to the first three chapters and completely rewrote the end of the last chapter to better tie up the many loose ends that I left dangling. I know that even my lady readers don't like dangling loose ends!

I have submitted all four chapters to Laz to post, so they should be out there as soon as "He Who Must Be Obeyed" gets them up and running.

Thank you again for your readership and your comments.

Mick