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Hi All
Well good things have happened.
The dreaded RexfordDam has offered to edit "I'll Fall In Love Again?" and I thankfully said yes. He went over it and sent me his edits, I read his and compared it to mine and now it is done.
I hope all of you who commented will re-read the story and let me know if it now is at a level, as many said, "Not my best work" and "It has fallen short of your usual level of writing".
RexfordDam has agreed to edit my other work as it comes along. Askepot is still doing The Strawberry Patch. Askepot has helped me raise the level of SP to the point that it is scoring over an 8 and I hope that my other works that are sitting at the high 5's and the middle to upper 6's will improve.
I have a story in the wings that I was going to use as my breakout on Patreon, but I've decided to keep writing for free. With these two outstanding folks editing for me, I hope that everyone enjoys my work. Keep in mind that sometimes, I just write weird shot!
Mick
Hi All
I asked for it and I got it. I went ahead and did a big rewrite and have posted them today.
I received several fairly comprehensive bits of critique and one offer to edit my stories, other than The Strawberry Patch, where Askepot has been putting up with my poor excuse for writing for the past eight months.
I've posted what I think are the needed changes. If the one volunteer does, indeed, take on editing my stand a lone stories, then I'll post the story one last time after he, or she, has perfected it.
I'm sorry for posting this POS. I really like the stories concept and now that I've cleaned it up, I see at least two or three sequels that could get my muses attention.
Happy reading all
Mick
Hi All
I forgot to turn on the comments. It is on now so let me have it!
I glanced at the post and the italicized stuff didn't come out right. I'll try to get that fixed.
I dropped Windows and Office in favor of Linux and LibreOffice.
Please leave your comments and be gentle.
Mick
Hi All
The working title was "The Shit Hits The Fan" and when you read the first part, you will understand why. Then my muse took off and here we are!
A new story in four parts, but all posted at the same time. I had no editor for this one, so if you find errors it's all your fault.
I hope you enjoy this and thank you again for your readership and your support over the years.
Mick
Hi All
The rewrite is posted! I hope you will give Chapter 4 a read and see if I finished it off on a better manner.
Mick
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