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Family Sex Date dropped its last chapter the epilog which in my style tend to be a chapter on its own.

Please if you like the story give it a favorable vote.

This was one of the harder stories to tell due to the need to be faithful to the subject and characters point of view. Not as straight forward as some of the others.

I have started on a short story of Zack and Heidi, his sister. Will see if it sees the light of publication.

Again feedback appreciated and requests too.

Hey followers. A writer I have had as a reader, editor idea guy on stories for a few years just joined SOL from that 'other' webpage.

He writes really good fantasy and other types or mystical stories. His first post on SOL is a fun magical romp with some college magicians at summer camp in Montana and a whole lot goes wrong and a fare amount of magical sex too. Check it out.

https://storiesonline.net/s/26681/spermamancy-and-the-bully-witch

New Story starts posting tomorrow and over the next four days. Four chapters and an epilog. Family Sex Date staring Zack and Danika and an expanded cast of family. To be honest this was a hard story to find a starting point and how to tell a story with some complex moral issues, at least from Zacks point of view. I almost gave up. This story does tackle another family’s incestuous practices, in 2029, from Zacks point of view as a guest. Much of the story is Zack and Rebekah talking and storytelling. That turned out to be the best way to tell the story. The way I write is also a journey itself just starting and seeing what happens and that is true with this story too.

When I write I value good characters, storyline then the sex, in that order. This is story with sex driven by the main characters and some plot. Not a spank story. It is just a few years from now the world is a little different, more conservative politically but also more socially liberal. My goal is to make the reader think about the subject while enjoying the story as it progresses. I do move the characters along the timeline. In the epilog we catch up with Hannah, Zacks dad Brock along with Ms Franks. There is also a time jump of a few years at the very end so please if you enjoy the characters be sure to see where our hero’s meet up a few years down the road.

Thanks to my editor Steve who came alongside my writing a couple of stories ago. Always makes the story better. I encourage any writers reading this who do not have an editor or proof reader to seek one out on SOL.

Of course, feedback and suggestions are always appreciated.

Pete

Just a quick update. A new story with Zack, Rebekah and Danika is at my editor for edits.

Three chapters and an epilog covers Zack's invitation to Danika's home for a sex date with her extended family. Zack has a lot of questions afterwards so he seeks out Rebekah for a long talk.

This was a hard story to write from the perspective of getting the emotions and actions reasonably correct.

So if you are interested look for it early in January.

Dear Readers, thank you for reading Brothel Night over the course of the 7 chapters the score went up, down and up again as the ‘night progressed'. That story was my longest effort to date. As I wrote before when I started, I had no idea how it would end and who the main characters would meet along the way. I'll admit to being a bit tired when I finished but it was fun to explore and create some new characters.

Just a note about the young people in the story. The events capture a moment in time for a few hours. You should assume they have all same emotions that teens today face from body image to self esteem to the constant battle of hormones. You can bet among that room of girls they were not all friends. There were also different reasons for attending and goals. Some of which I tried to shed light on in the fictional world a few years hence.

I do try and keep my stories as grounded in reality as possible. If I get a little wordy it is because I think these pages are great place to explore the ‘what if’ along with moral and ethical questions. I have stayed away from stating what I think the political landscape will look like in 2029 but I believe it will be more conservative in governance but continue to be more liberal socially.

Looking ahead there is a new shorter 3 chapter story that will post in the next week. Expect to see it start to drop Monday. Zack goes on a date with… It’s a fun to the point story that also moves the story along the timeline. The last to drop on Friday will be an epilog that updates a few other things that have happened as the school year ends.

I do appreciate feedback from readers.