Pete Fox: Blog

New Story starts posting tomorrow and over the next four days. Four chapters and an epilog. Family Sex Date staring Zack and Danika and an expanded cast of family. To be honest this was a hard story to find a starting point and how to tell a story with some complex moral issues, at least from Zacks point of view. I almost gave up. This story does tackle another family’s incestuous practices, in 2029, from Zacks point of view as a guest. Much of the story is Zack and Rebekah talking and storytelling. That turned out to be the best way to tell the story. The way I write is also a journey itself just starting and seeing what happens and that is true with this story too.

When I write I value good characters, storyline then the sex, in that order. This is story with sex driven by the main characters and some plot. Not a spank story. It is just a few years from now the world is a little different, more conservative politically but also more socially liberal. My goal is to make the reader think about the subject while enjoying the story as it progresses. I do move the characters along the timeline. In the epilog we catch up with Hannah, Zacks dad Brock along with Ms Franks. There is also a time jump of a few years at the very end so please if you enjoy the characters be sure to see where our hero’s meet up a few years down the road.

Thanks to my editor Steve who came alongside my writing a couple of stories ago. Always makes the story better. I encourage any writers reading this who do not have an editor or proof reader to seek one out on SOL.

Of course, feedback and suggestions are always appreciated.

Pete

Just a quick update. A new story with Zack, Rebekah and Danika is at my editor for edits.

Three chapters and an epilog covers Zack's invitation to Danika's home for a sex date with her extended family. Zack has a lot of questions afterwards so he seeks out Rebekah for a long talk.

This was a hard story to write from the perspective of getting the emotions and actions reasonably correct.

So if you are interested look for it early in January.

Dear Readers, thank you for reading Brothel Night over the course of the 7 chapters the score went up, down and up again as the ‘night progressed'. That story was my longest effort to date. As I wrote before when I started, I had no idea how it would end and who the main characters would meet along the way. I'll admit to being a bit tired when I finished but it was fun to explore and create some new characters.

Just a note about the young people in the story. The events capture a moment in time for a few hours. You should assume they have all same emotions that teens today face from body image to self esteem to the constant battle of hormones. You can bet among that room of girls they were not all friends. There were also different reasons for attending and goals. Some of which I tried to shed light on in the fictional world a few years hence.

I do try and keep my stories as grounded in reality as possible. If I get a little wordy it is because I think these pages are great place to explore the ‘what if’ along with moral and ethical questions. I have stayed away from stating what I think the political landscape will look like in 2029 but I believe it will be more conservative in governance but continue to be more liberal socially.

Looking ahead there is a new shorter 3 chapter story that will post in the next week. Expect to see it start to drop Monday. Zack goes on a date with… It’s a fun to the point story that also moves the story along the timeline. The last to drop on Friday will be an epilog that updates a few other things that have happened as the school year ends.

I do appreciate feedback from readers.

Chapter 5 of Brothel Night has posted. After the final chapter there will be a epilog wrapping up some loose ends. Still have to write it.

First positive and constructive feedback is appreciated. I got a couple of positive messages and a bunch of new followers. If you enjoyed the story and/or would like to hear more on a character story line feel free to message me. It helps.

When I decided to write this story about a high school brothel, I had no idea how to do so. It took months of false starts. Usually on where to begin. When I started I just knew it would have 4 main characters, Zack, his dad Brock, Lisa/Mrs Strong and of course Hannah. Once I started, I just let the story go where it went. I found characters and story lines along the way. I had never tried to write a story with this many characters and visual cues to describe. Thankfully after Chapter 1, Steven volunteer to edit and really made the story smoother and better, seeing the works promise.

For me and like many mainline authors I read, I just set out on a journey of discovery not knowing where it was going. So if at points it feels like I am finding my way, I was. I decided to add a mysterious backstory. The original author of the Sex Date series posted his stories under an incest tag and I continued the tradition, adding incest spice. The bi scene with Zack, Bethany and VP Burns that was a surprise to me too, it just felt right in 2029 there would be a more open environment though not an interest in mine to write more than what I did. Same with Danika's incest scene is just happened.

So there are a lot of new characters, hence the character list. Any future story will focus less on Hannah and move into Zacks very complicated world.

Again thanks for reading and positive creative feedback helpful as the scoring system can be all over the place in judging if the story is being enjoyed. In the end I write for myself telling a story I want to read and have bouncing around in my head. Heck who would not want to go to this high school if you could.

I just started releasing Brothel Night. An idea that I have had for a long time. Took me a few months to figure out how to write this story. I wrote 30 Word pages in about a week at the end of the summer. I also shared it with EazinAlong who had the original idea.

I also decided I was not creating art, just a fun story so stopped messing around and pushed it out. I have three more chapters not including and ending to publish this month.

Update since I posted the first chapters an editor volunteered to take a pass at it. Thanks to Steve for improving the work.

As to the girls outfits I was inspired by Black Fox Lingerie, search it out if interested in seeing the outfits, they also do photography.

I did get distracted by writing some Wheel of Time Fanfic over on Ao3 after I listened to the first book in the last week.

There will be more chapters possibly chp 2 this week followed by 3 that just need work. Any constructive feedback appreciated.