Pete Fox: Blog

I decided to try something different. There were a couple of scenes that did not make it into Zack and Heidi Playtime. I cleaned them up and had my editor Steve take a couple of passes. Just add on to Chp 6 & 7. Note there is no voting on commenting enable and the tagging is minimal. Enjoy. It can be found under the series tab.

A couple of people have asked if the series will continue. Yes. But after a break for travel as I have to refresh my ideas.

Brothel Night. Over the weekend I did some edits on the entire story, mostly in Chp 5. Just cleaning up a few things and continuality issues I missed or that came up as I wrote more stories. If you have not read it, I hope you will as it is a key piece of in the series.

Thanks for reading. Next story probably in the May time frame.

This week Playtime will conclude with chapters 6 and 7 posting. No, not the end but the story is at a good place to stop and take a break, so I will conclude the story. The story has done well on ratings so hopefully these chapters don’t disappoint. Not as heavy on the sex. Chp 7 Concludes with some big events and teases the next story line.

The location in the Vietnam story line, the hotel and palace and surrounding area are all real as of 2022. I encourage you to look them up. The events are based loosely on what happened on Nov 1, 1963 but with a 2037 update.

The summer camp location is also loosely based on a real nudist resort though the location moved to west coast of FL.

As the title suggests I have tried to focus more on Zack and his sister Heidi's relationship. As a writer it has been fun to figure that relationship out and play with it and their friends and family in a safe fantasy erotica setting. Though this story concludes there is more to come. But there will be a break of several weeks.

Feedback is always appreciated.

Its a holiday weekend here in the US. Lists like those over on Clit awards I found they are useful in pointing me to quality works.

I realize that I have now gathered 14 really good stories on my favorites list. Not necessarily in ranked order of quality after the first 4. But they are all excellent. So I will share. Do you have a list?

https://storiesonline.net/library/authorFavorites.php?id=2056

As I work through a bit of a mental block on my next Zack and Heidi chapter, I have found it helpful to go read a few others like Lubrican for inspiration.

Chapter 5 of Playtime is posting on Saturday.

Zack and Heidi continue to get to know each other with the help of family. The story moves to the first afternoon at the family resort with other like minded family. The Van Winter’s help break the ice when it comes to family love before the first night of the big party gets started. In 2037 in Saigon, Zack runs into family while he waits for his sister to arrive for a visit and sparks fly and intrigue. He also completes another cross border mission.

I have opened comments on all my posts now, would love feedback if you like the story.

Just note as the story progresses things might happen that are NOT coded such as brief M/m in passing or other hardcore acts that are brief moments but as the author I wish to surprise the reader. Please keep reading and don’t vote the story down. SOL has a lot sensitive readers it appears who can easily be offended while reading on an erotic story.

I do encourage you to look at my cast list as I have put the names of models that I think at that moment in time give you and idea of the characters looks as I imagine them.

Already at work on chapter six and then there will be a longer break as I travel.

Thank you for reading.

Chapter 4 of Zack and Heidi Playtime posts Thursday. This is a transition chapter as the action shifts and I introduce some new characters, locations and thoughts. This 4000 word chapter focuses on Zack and Danika.

If you have not read the first 3 chapters this would be a good time to do so.