Pete Fox: Blog

Chapter 4 of Zack and Heidi Playtime posts Thursday. This is a transition chapter as the action shifts and I introduce some new characters, locations and thoughts. This 4000 word chapter focuses on Zack and Danika.

If you have not read the first 3 chapters this would be a good time to do so.

The first 3 chapters of the new episode with Zack and his older sister Heidi have posted. Being a holiday I decided to post chapter 3 a day early.

I try to both image tech and morals a few short years from now and create a believable yet fun story. In order to give perspective to what has happened to them as teens I jumped part of the story ahead a few years to another Asian land war that Zack and Danika find themselves witness too. Who knows maybe will others join them we will find out.

Heidi's band try out song is the current piece for the Army Band program. If you have not seen any Army band play try this link that includes the flute players of the West Point band...is Heidi in there somewhere playing her piccolo? https://youtu.be/wFJCDxcrqsc?t=120

This story will continue once I figure out the next chapter/s.

Feedback and comments appreciated.

After the complicated story of Zack with Danika's family we now get to spend time with Zack and his older sister Heidi. The family have an invitation to a nudist resort with Danika's family, where incestuous things can happen. In these three chapters we experience the two siblings getting close, crossing a few taboo lines as they decide if they want to go on the trip. I think it's a pretty hot and well balanced story. Things also happen in Vietnam.

Taking advantage of the long weekend here in the US I am posting the first chapter Sunday then the next two in the days after.

I will not conclude the story as other chapters may be added later.

As always any feedback is appreciated.

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Family Sex Date dropped its last chapter the epilog which in my style tend to be a chapter on its own.

Please if you like the story give it a favorable vote.

This was one of the harder stories to tell due to the need to be faithful to the subject and characters point of view. Not as straight forward as some of the others.

I have started on a short story of Zack and Heidi, his sister. Will see if it sees the light of publication.

Again feedback appreciated and requests too.

Hey followers. A writer I have had as a reader, editor idea guy on stories for a few years just joined SOL from that 'other' webpage.

He writes really good fantasy and other types or mystical stories. His first post on SOL is a fun magical romp with some college magicians at summer camp in Montana and a whole lot goes wrong and a fare amount of magical sex too. Check it out.

https://storiesonline.net/s/26681/spermamancy-and-the-bully-witch