Pete Fox: Blog

After the complicated story of Zack with Danika's family we now get to spend time with Zack and his older sister Heidi. The family have an invitation to a nudist resort with Danika's family, where incestuous things can happen. In these three chapters we experience the two siblings getting close, crossing a few taboo lines as they decide if they want to go on the trip. I think it's a pretty hot and well balanced story. Things also happen in Vietnam.

Taking advantage of the long weekend here in the US I am posting the first chapter Sunday then the next two in the days after.

I will not conclude the story as other chapters may be added later.

As always any feedback is appreciated.

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Family Sex Date dropped its last chapter the epilog which in my style tend to be a chapter on its own.

Please if you like the story give it a favorable vote.

This was one of the harder stories to tell due to the need to be faithful to the subject and characters point of view. Not as straight forward as some of the others.

I have started on a short story of Zack and Heidi, his sister. Will see if it sees the light of publication.

Again feedback appreciated and requests too.

Hey followers. A writer I have had as a reader, editor idea guy on stories for a few years just joined SOL from that 'other' webpage.

He writes really good fantasy and other types or mystical stories. His first post on SOL is a fun magical romp with some college magicians at summer camp in Montana and a whole lot goes wrong and a fare amount of magical sex too. Check it out.

https://storiesonline.net/s/26681/spermamancy-and-the-bully-witch

New Story starts posting tomorrow and over the next four days. Four chapters and an epilog. Family Sex Date staring Zack and Danika and an expanded cast of family. To be honest this was a hard story to find a starting point and how to tell a story with some complex moral issues, at least from Zacks point of view. I almost gave up. This story does tackle another family’s incestuous practices, in 2029, from Zacks point of view as a guest. Much of the story is Zack and Rebekah talking and storytelling. That turned out to be the best way to tell the story. The way I write is also a journey itself just starting and seeing what happens and that is true with this story too.

When I write I value good characters, storyline then the sex, in that order. This is story with sex driven by the main characters and some plot. Not a spank story. It is just a few years from now the world is a little different, more conservative politically but also more socially liberal. My goal is to make the reader think about the subject while enjoying the story as it progresses. I do move the characters along the timeline. In the epilog we catch up with Hannah, Zacks dad Brock along with Ms Franks. There is also a time jump of a few years at the very end so please if you enjoy the characters be sure to see where our hero’s meet up a few years down the road.

Thanks to my editor Steve who came alongside my writing a couple of stories ago. Always makes the story better. I encourage any writers reading this who do not have an editor or proof reader to seek one out on SOL.

Of course, feedback and suggestions are always appreciated.

Pete

Just a quick update. A new story with Zack, Rebekah and Danika is at my editor for edits.

Three chapters and an epilog covers Zack's invitation to Danika's home for a sex date with her extended family. Zack has a lot of questions afterwards so he seeks out Rebekah for a long talk.

This was a hard story to write from the perspective of getting the emotions and actions reasonably correct.

So if you are interested look for it early in January.