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Chapter 5 of Playtime is posting on Saturday.

Zack and Heidi continue to get to know each other with the help of family. The story moves to the first afternoon at the family resort with other like minded family. The Van Winter’s help break the ice when it comes to family love before the first night of the big party gets started. In 2037 in Saigon, Zack runs into family while he waits for his sister to arrive for a visit and sparks fly and intrigue. He also completes another cross border mission.

I have opened comments on all my posts now, would love feedback if you like the story.

Just note as the story progresses things might happen that are NOT coded such as brief M/m in passing or other hardcore acts that are brief moments but as the author I wish to surprise the reader. Please keep reading and don’t vote the story down. SOL has a lot sensitive readers it appears who can easily be offended while reading on an erotic story.

I do encourage you to look at my cast list as I have put the names of models that I think at that moment in time give you and idea of the characters looks as I imagine them.

Already at work on chapter six and then there will be a longer break as I travel.

Thank you for reading.

Chapter 4 of Zack and Heidi Playtime posts Thursday. This is a transition chapter as the action shifts and I introduce some new characters, locations and thoughts. This 4000 word chapter focuses on Zack and Danika.

If you have not read the first 3 chapters this would be a good time to do so.

The first 3 chapters of the new episode with Zack and his older sister Heidi have posted. Being a holiday I decided to post chapter 3 a day early.

I try to both image tech and morals a few short years from now and create a believable yet fun story. In order to give perspective to what has happened to them as teens I jumped part of the story ahead a few years to another Asian land war that Zack and Danika find themselves witness too. Who knows maybe will others join them we will find out.

Heidi's band try out song is the current piece for the Army Band program. If you have not seen any Army band play try this link that includes the flute players of the West Point band...is Heidi in there somewhere playing her piccolo? https://youtu.be/wFJCDxcrqsc?t=120

This story will continue once I figure out the next chapter/s.

Feedback and comments appreciated.

After the complicated story of Zack with Danika's family we now get to spend time with Zack and his older sister Heidi. The family have an invitation to a nudist resort with Danika's family, where incestuous things can happen. In these three chapters we experience the two siblings getting close, crossing a few taboo lines as they decide if they want to go on the trip. I think it's a pretty hot and well balanced story. Things also happen in Vietnam.

Taking advantage of the long weekend here in the US I am posting the first chapter Sunday then the next two in the days after.

I will not conclude the story as other chapters may be added later.

As always any feedback is appreciated.

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Family Sex Date dropped its last chapter the epilog which in my style tend to be a chapter on its own.

Please if you like the story give it a favorable vote.

This was one of the harder stories to tell due to the need to be faithful to the subject and characters point of view. Not as straight forward as some of the others.

I have started on a short story of Zack and Heidi, his sister. Will see if it sees the light of publication.

Again feedback appreciated and requests too.