Pete Fox: Blog

This week Playtime will conclude with chapters 6 and 7 posting. No, not the end but the story is at a good place to stop and take a break, so I will conclude the story. The story has done well on ratings so hopefully these chapters don’t disappoint. Not as heavy on the sex. Chp 7 Concludes with some big events and teases the next story line.

The location in the Vietnam story line, the hotel and palace and surrounding area are all real as of 2022. I encourage you to look them up. The events are based loosely on what happened on Nov 1, 1963 but with a 2037 update.

The summer camp location is also loosely based on a real nudist resort though the location moved to west coast of FL.

As the title suggests I have tried to focus more on Zack and his sister Heidi's relationship. As a writer it has been fun to figure that relationship out and play with it and their friends and family in a safe fantasy erotica setting. Though this story concludes there is more to come. But there will be a break of several weeks.

Feedback is always appreciated.

Its a holiday weekend here in the US. Lists like those over on Clit awards I found they are useful in pointing me to quality works.

I realize that I have now gathered 14 really good stories on my favorites list. Not necessarily in ranked order of quality after the first 4. But they are all excellent. So I will share. Do you have a list?

https://storiesonline.net/library/authorFavorites.php?id=2056

As I work through a bit of a mental block on my next Zack and Heidi chapter, I have found it helpful to go read a few others like Lubrican for inspiration.

Chapter 5 of Playtime is posting on Saturday.

Zack and Heidi continue to get to know each other with the help of family. The story moves to the first afternoon at the family resort with other like minded family. The Van Winter’s help break the ice when it comes to family love before the first night of the big party gets started. In 2037 in Saigon, Zack runs into family while he waits for his sister to arrive for a visit and sparks fly and intrigue. He also completes another cross border mission.

I have opened comments on all my posts now, would love feedback if you like the story.

Just note as the story progresses things might happen that are NOT coded such as brief M/m in passing or other hardcore acts that are brief moments but as the author I wish to surprise the reader. Please keep reading and don’t vote the story down. SOL has a lot sensitive readers it appears who can easily be offended while reading on an erotic story.

I do encourage you to look at my cast list as I have put the names of models that I think at that moment in time give you and idea of the characters looks as I imagine them.

Already at work on chapter six and then there will be a longer break as I travel.

Thank you for reading.

Chapter 4 of Zack and Heidi Playtime posts Thursday. This is a transition chapter as the action shifts and I introduce some new characters, locations and thoughts. This 4000 word chapter focuses on Zack and Danika.

If you have not read the first 3 chapters this would be a good time to do so.

The first 3 chapters of the new episode with Zack and his older sister Heidi have posted. Being a holiday I decided to post chapter 3 a day early.

I try to both image tech and morals a few short years from now and create a believable yet fun story. In order to give perspective to what has happened to them as teens I jumped part of the story ahead a few years to another Asian land war that Zack and Danika find themselves witness too. Who knows maybe will others join them we will find out.

Heidi's band try out song is the current piece for the Army Band program. If you have not seen any Army band play try this link that includes the flute players of the West Point band...is Heidi in there somewhere playing her piccolo? https://youtu.be/wFJCDxcrqsc?t=120

This story will continue once I figure out the next chapter/s.

Feedback and comments appreciated.