Pete Fox: Blog

My new story A Christmas Swap with Friends has posted. It’s a true story told from the 1stPOV and as with these types of stories some details have been changed for both privacy and for the flow of the story. 5 chapters.

I read Outlander series author Diana Gabaldon’s book I Give You My Body on how to write sex scenes before I started writing this story. Her big piece of advice was that the best sex scenes are an exchange of emotions between the parties. Dialog is key, lots of it. I attempted to listen to her advice and put it into practice.

I hope you enjoy my 2nd attempt at this type of storytelling.

Feedback is appreciated.

Pete

Readers,

I have had the follow up to my only true stroy that I have written, A Massage With Friends, sitting on my hard drive for a year. Unsure whether to share the details of my first swap with my old friends and another couple. Of cours teenage Beth was involved so that was part of the problem.

Look for the story to drop in early December. I am editing it now with my editor for content and clarity. It's 5 chapters in length.

Thanks for reading.

Pete

Readers,
I have posted 3 new chapters to Brock Acts of Violence and Passion. We finally get violence, not of the BDSM type, but also lots of passion. So much I had to break it into two chapters. My hope is/was to balance the violence of chapter 4 with equal amounts of passion in the next chapter but well got carried away.

Relationships old and new move along having fun and drama. Zack is still into his breastfeeding kink, and he also has new girl to be interested in. At the same time his father’s company is under threat. This in the first story I wrote heavily from Brocks point of view early on.

I'll pause the story at chapter 6 for a while. I’m traveling so less time and have a couple of others short story ideas I want to try and write.

On a side note. I started this story while I was traveling in Greece and as a result you will see many Greek influences and well I got a bit wordy in chp 1 around my love of Aphrodite. If you can see one of her statues in person, you will fall under her 2500+ year old spell too.

I also dropped at least 6 homages to classic, tv, movie and music groups in the story… you have to look closely, some are obvious others you might have to do a bit of sleuthing.

Thanks for reading all feedback appreciated. And a reminder this is an ongoing series.

Pete Fox

Readers,

Chapter 3 has posted. The underwear and welcome party for the Sinclair’s kicks up a few notches in intensity and passion. This chapter mostly focuses on the action on the back patio. I’m finding that the key to writing these larger party stories is focusing on the small groups, breaking it down to 4 or 5 key relationships. I also like details from drink to art to boobs so I get a little wordy at times so readers need deal with it. :)

For those who don’t write or who are thinking of doing so. ‘Hosting’ a party on paper is just as complicated as in the real world. Who do you invite, what time of day, how many people, what’s the theme? Who supplies the food and drink and entertainment? What does the venue look like? Writing the story gets complicated fast, if like me you try and paint a nice interesting picture but not go over the top with details. This is all before figuring out what actually happens at said party.

In this story I have some overall goals for the bigger story (passion and violence) and minor goals for each chapter in my head. I also have themes like Zack being challenged by a girl outside his Saint-U circle who does not participate in his lifestyle. Brock facing a big threat from competitors and what does that look like. At the same time exploring the relationships that have developed over 7 previous stories and pushing them further down the road in a realistic manner for 2029. The rest who does who and does what just comes out as I write. Even I was surprised by the ending of chapter 3.

I have a certain show vs tell narrative style. Not for everyone and sometimes slow. I don’t do the mechanical highly detailed sex scenes, but sex is there and is a key part but so is the story and relationships. Readers will also get doses of history and moral philosophizing and of course boobs. If its not clear the story takes place in 2029, a few years from now so I have freedom to make some stuff up but I do try and remain grounded.

Thanks for checking my work out. Not sure when the next chapter will drop. But you can assume there will be violence soon, balancing out the passion. Note not a BDSM story in anyway.

Pete Fox

Nashville, TN

I recently posted chapter 2 of Acts of Passion. In this chapter the underwear welcome party for the Sinclairs kicks into higher gear with some games and some sex, still it's mostly sexy set up for later chapters.

I also introduce to my protagonist Zack a new character a girl from outside his circle. The long term point being to show contrasts between his sex date free for all world, with what is 'normal' outside his smallish bubble and what he is missing as he grows up.

Also I start to dig deeper into the dark side of the private military company Pegasus Group, that Brock is Chief Operating Officer (COO) of. Mainly because I want to add an action element to the story. A little bit more interesting than sex scenes with the same old people.

I try to be true to the details and emotions in this 2029 world. I’m a history buff so I do throw in nuggets of real world history. I also spend time looking at aspects of what the world might be like a few years from now when it comes to the Great Game and such. My editor also does a good job of keeping me true.

No idea when chapter 3 will drop. I am writing them as I go and have time. Often writing myself down a path then starting the drafting process over. Voting, I turn that on near the end. No one should vote on a story they have not read most of.

Thanks for reading, feedback always appreciated.