Pete Fox: Blog

Instead of writing a new story I have been doing edits and rewrites.

With space and time its easier to see where you can improve.

I updated and corrected small errors in Zack and Heidi Playtime. Chp 5,6 and 7.

I also edited and rewrote chapter 3 of Steele Family Weekend. My first action / adventure. A short 3 chapter story that is one of my favs.

These two stories with Zack and Melisa Reunion are a good set to read to get into the series.

Writers block right now.

Thanks for reading.

Readers,
I decided to post the prologue of a yet unwritten follow up to Christmas Swap. Just to wet the appetite. I have yet to write down the rest.

As the lives of Beth, Sasha and Pete(me) move into 2019 I have not decided on the focus. Should I just jump around or stay liner in my story telling. Focus on Beth or the growing circle of friends. Current events are driving my story telling interests re Ukraine, so will see.

Enjoy
Pete

Loyal Readers,
I have two stories in the nomination phase of the Clit awards. Both did well last year with positive votes. Two of my best efforts. If you have time I would love a vote for both. Just to get me out of the nominee’s phase. Top 10 in each category move on is the usual rule to be voted on as finalists.

Two in best medium erotic story.
https://clitoridesawards.org/view_nominees.php?cat=3

One in best incest story.
https://clitoridesawards.org/view_nominees.php?cat=18

And if you have not had a chance to read either story now would be a good time.

I appreciate your vote.

Pete

Readers,
I am happy to announce. The final chapters of Acts of Passion and Violence have been posted. I hope you will like them. As the title suggests my story has been about Acts of Passion and Violence (not the BDSM type) and how the two work off each other. I also wanted to get away from the basic just teen sex storyline. Write a story with more action outside the bedroom, adult drama. But also, fun entertaining sex scenes with characters we have all invested in or enjoy.

I started this story last July when I was on vacation in Greece. It was boiling hot outside. Lying under the hotel a/c one afternoon I wrote the first part of chapter 1. That is why you see all the Greek references. I fell in love with a 2500-year-old statue of Aphrodite, she was my muse for the early parts. Now as the final 2 chapters post I am heading to Asia. In between I wrote the more personal A Christmas Swap with Friends story, please take a look.

Chapter 7 starts with our cast on a mission in Estonia, sort of 007 like, on New Year’s tracking a murder. Then chapter 8 finishes with the Steele family on New Year’s Eve for some hot family action. There are a few surprises. I don’t think you will be disappointed. If you like the new Zack and Elena storyline, please read to the end of the Epilogue for a fun erotic scene that teases what is to come with those two.

I had a lot of fun writing the story. My editor Steve was quick to turn around my many drafts making the process smooth. The great writer Wilbur Smith has a quote about writing that I use to remind myself who I am writing for, me. I write stories that I enjoy and hope others enjoy my work.

“Write for yourself, not for a perceived audience. If you do, you'll mostly fall flat on your face, because it's impossible to judge what people want. And you have to read. That's how you learn what is good writing and what is bad. Then the main thing is application. It's hard work.”
Wilbur Smith

My new story A Christmas Swap with Friends has posted. It’s a true story told from the 1stPOV and as with these types of stories some details have been changed for both privacy and for the flow of the story. 5 chapters.

I read Outlander series author Diana Gabaldon’s book I Give You My Body on how to write sex scenes before I started writing this story. Her big piece of advice was that the best sex scenes are an exchange of emotions between the parties. Dialog is key, lots of it. I attempted to listen to her advice and put it into practice.

I hope you enjoy my 2nd attempt at this type of storytelling.

Feedback is appreciated.

Pete