Pete Fox: Blog

Readers,

Earlier in the week Chapter 9 was posted. If there was a theme for this chapter, it would be virginity stories. That wasn’t the plan when I started writing over a months ago it just came about.

It is a long chapter at just over 10,000 words. My editor Steve and I started with the bare bones of the story, and I added depth later on. There were a few false starts and miss directions. I hate writing virginity chapters, so this took time to find the right mix.

I also research and look at what was happening along the timeline. Like back in the late 80s Monster Rock was big. I even saw the Scorpions myself. Joan Jet was cool.

We are getting close to the end of 2005 and the end of book 1. I will continue to tease and toss curveballs. Nothing worse than a boring overly predictable story.

Here are three links that I used during my research.

Kristy’s top.

Joan Jet.

Monsters of Rock.

Feedback and comments appreciated.

Pete

Readers,

I have posted Chapter 8. There are probably 2-4 Chapters left in Act 1 which I plan to finish by the end of this year. This chapter is setting up the rest of December 2005. I have not even written a word on the next chapter and am busy with work so no date on Chapter 9 to share.

Just enjoy this fun chapter where a lot is learned and some fun is had by all.

I wont say go Cowboys, because we all know how the 2005 season turned out for them. (all football scores are accurate)

Pete

Dear Readers,

Chapters 6 and 7 have been posted. I also added a notable cast list. Both chapters should be read together. As 7 builds on 6. In these chapters the theme of family education continues with 3 families getting together on Saturday night. Where a group of naked adults and teens test the boundaries of decency and friendship all in the spirit of education. We are probably ¾ of the way through Act 1 of 3 which will end at the end of 2005 in the book.

Again, the way I write, I just start writing with an idea or two and see what happens with the characters and hopefully move the story along the timeline while having fun. My editor said chapter 7 was ‘hot’ and his doesn’t say that often. With this fiction I hope I am doing a good job of exploring the themes of family sexuality, service to country, faith and the role secrets play. Along with tossing in a bit of fanfiction just for the heck of it. Question everything, ‘the book’, characters, and whether incest is good or bad in this fictional context.

As of today, the story is 114 pages and 53K words. 3-5 more chapters to go in this ‘book’, I think.

Check my blog page for some helpful links.

I did turn on comments for my stories. If you like the story drop a comment.

If you are interested in discussion of pros and cons of the incest issue, google The Ethics of Incest by Jeff Sebo (2006). Or A LIBERTANIAN CRITIQUE OF INCEST LAWS: PHILOSOPHICAL AND ANTHROPOLOGICAL PERSPECTIVES by GABRIEL ERNESTO ANDRADE (2021).

Reader feedback is appreciated.

Pete

Dear Readers,

Chapters 6 and 7 have been posted. I also added a notable cast list. Both chapters should be read together. As 7 builds on 6. In these chapters the theme of family education continues with 3 families getting together on Saturday night. Where a group of naked adults and teens test the boundaries of decency and friendship all in the spirit of education. We are probably ¾ of the way through Act 1 of 3 which will end at the end of 2005 in the book.

Again, the way I write, I just start writing with an idea or two and see what happens with the characters and hopefully move the story along the timeline while having fun. My editor said chapter 7 was ‘hot’ and his doesn’t say that often. With this fiction I hope I am doing a good job of exploring the themes of family sexuality, service to country, faith and the role secrets play. Along with tossing in a bit of fanfiction just for the heck of it. Question everything, ‘the book’, characters, and whether incest is good or bad in this fictional context.

As of today, the story is 114 pages and 53K words. 3-5 more chapters to go in this ‘book’, I think.

I did turn on comments for my stories. If you like the story drop a comment.

Below are some links you might find helpful that I used while writing.

Hannah inspiration, Rachel Weisz in the Mummy, gorgeous.

Sarah inspiration, Emma Watson.

Cassandra inspiration, Ally Sheedy Breakfast Club.

Bobs Harley.

Bobs everyday carry, Colt Combat Commander 1911.45cal.

If you are interested in discussion of pros and cons of the incest issue, google The Ethics of Incest by Jeff Sebo (2006). Or A LIBERTANIAN CRITIQUE OF INCEST LAWS: PHILOSOPHICAL AND ANTHROPOLOGICAL PERSPECTIVES by GABRIEL ERNESTO ANDRADE (2021).

Enjoy. Reader feedbak is always appreciated.

Pete

Readers

First thank you to everyone who has read and voted.

Chapter 5 posted today.

I took some time to consider the path forward. There will be a conclusion. Think of this story as a traditional 3 act story arch with a bit of heroes journey tossed in. I also get bored so toss in elements like at the end of chp 4 and 5 for fun.
Book 1 or Act 1 will end roughly at the end of 2005 and I hope to finished in the next couple of months depending on how busy I am. Also this is not a daily diary. During the week the characters have boring tedious lives and I only touch on events that move the story along and I think are fun.

When I write a chapter for the most part I have an idea but then the rest just comes out. In chapter 5 all the fun scenes just happened as I wrote. I had goals to move along the story but otherwise it’s a journey.

Again thanks for reading. Feedback appreciated.

Pete