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Readers,
Thank you for reading Chapter 17 the first of Book 2. Chapter 18 jumps ahead a month and has now posted. It’s a long chapter at near 13,000 words. Most of the action concerns Bob and Hannah, going heavy on the fanfiction storyline introduced at the end of Chapter 4, but also some sexy home front action involving Kristy. This will be the last chapter posted for 2024. I did make a few edits to Chapter 17 smoothing out a couple of scenes and fixing typos.
Just a reminder as you read. Ask yourself are the families involved living up to the premise of the home nudity experiment? Could the book and its advice happen for real? I do know some home nudists. As this is a work of fiction it’s a 3-act play, and we are in the part where it will get darker before the dawn. Don’t take everything on face value, I try and leave little clues about where things are going. I do know where and when the story will end. Like you, I am on a journey experiencing along with the characters the trials and tribulations of the Home Nudity Experiment.
My goal is to bring you a fun, realistic, sexy stories of the type I would want to read. That takes time to do it right and many emails with my editor. As always thanks to my editor Steve for his feedback and fast turn arounds.
As to the Sex Date Series, no update on new chapters. I did give a fresh edit to all nine stories this year, in some cases adding fresh scenes and added a new story, Memorial Day, along with cover art for each. I will come back to this series hopefully in 2025.
Have a good Thanksgiving, Christmas, Hanukkah etc. I will be spending the holidays some place warm this year.
Feedback is appreciated.
Pete
Readers,
Book 2 of Wilkens and Friends Home Nudity Experiment has started posting. Chapter 17 is up, and Chapter 18 will follow next weekend. In 17 the Wilkens and Miller couples officially swap/swing together, with a twist. A long debauched fun scene followed by a couple of shorter scenes with Gwen and Oksana.
As Book 2 will cover a good amount of 2006, there will be time jumps to keep the story moving along with appropriate flashbacks. The story is not a daily journal. Chapter 18 jumps ahead a month covering events at home and in Iraq with Hannah having her first archaeology adventure with her new job with the Air Force, also with twists, but more on that next weekend.
That will be it for this year chapter wise as I will be on a long vacation overseas relaxing and seeking inspiration.
Pete
Readers,
I just updated and provided new cover art for one of my first stories, Dutch Daughter - Our First Swing in Holland, a short story about swinging in Holland in the 1990s. It is a story rewrite from a woman’s perspective. If you want a quick read while you are in a line or sitting on the toilet, try this one.
Due to work and travel I have not written much original content this year. I did write Memorial Day back in May, part of the Sex Date Series. I also edited the entire sex date series with editor Steves support. I did the same with Home Nudity Experiment and added two new chapters.
If you are looking for good erotica, which can be hard to find, my Favorites list has 21 examples of good writing, from my perspective.
Pete
Readers,
As I wrote previously, I felt there was more to tell in this story to finish out the year 2005. A month ago, Chapter 15 was published. Now Chapter 16 has been posted. This chapter’s 12,000 words primarily deal with Monica, Bob’s other sister. The story digs into her past and how that affected her parents’ decisions not to invite family members to participate in social nudity and/or the swinging lifestyle. There are twists and I even managed to surprise my editor. The book length story is compete.
The chapter is a little longer than normal as I also attempted to wrap up, for now, other storylines. There is a lot of dialog, and some fun sex scenes, but this is a character focused chapter that ends New Year’s Eve 2005/06. When I write I try to do what makes sense to the plot and characters and have fun at the same time. So sorry, if some of you are disappointed certain characters didn’t do certain things.
I have also updated the Epilogue to reflect events that took place in Chapters 15 & 16. So even if you previously read the Epilogue take the time to do so again. It’s not long and you will be rewarded with a peek at 2006.
Again, feedback is appreciated. After a reader noticed a couple of typos, I edited chapters 4-10 last week so all of the chapters except the first 3 have been updated this year. There will be a book 2, I just don’t know when.
Pete
Readers,
Surprise. I just posted Chapter 15 to Wilkins and Friends Home Nudity Experiment. As the chapter starts, we are still at the nudist resort in FL. When I closed out the story last December, I felt there were still some encounters yet to be told. Mothers and sons, dads and daughters and more along with some unanswered questions to be resolved. 10,000 words of fun.
Another reason I am posting this chapter now is that it has been a very busy year so far for me and I have not had time nor inspiration for Book 2 yet, though I have written a few thousand words. Instead, I did a lot of edits to this book and on my Sex Date Series. So, for now this chapter and probably chapter 16 to follow.
After Chp 15 posted I made a couple of edits to the Epilogue, scene change.
Starting with Chapter 11, I have been experimenting with AI created character art. Plus the cover.
This has been my most popular story to date by view count. Thank you for reading and voting.
Thanks to my editor Steve for the edits and timely turnaround.
Feedback is always appreciated.
Pete
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