Pete Fox: Blog

Readers,

Zack and Danika a Family Sex Date has been updated to include cover art. I think the story reads really well and starts with a conversation between Zack and Rebekah as they sunbathe topless in a Nashville park. In this story we learn more about the Van Winter family and Danika. The four chapters cover the ‘family sex date’ at Danika’s house and I introduce a new family. The epilogue covers other events, including the first time jump. After Brothel Night this was my next effort at writing a group sex scene.

I’m pausing my updates of the series to try and write the Memorial Day weekend events from 2029.

Enjoy.

Pete

Readers,

With the help of editor Steve, I stared reediting Brock Acts of Passion and Violence in February. Followed by Brothel Night in March. Brothel Night was more of a complete rewrite of a couple of sections, improving scenes and flow of the entire story. And for the first time I added a piece of cover art. Lastly this week we edited Zack and Rebekah a Sex Date, improved scene, flow and adding cover art. There are 8 stories in the series so far and I hope to take a look at all of them in the next few months.

If you haven’t read the stories since they were published starting at the end of 2021 and are looking for sexy fun series to entertain you now would be a good time. I enjoyed rereading my stories as I had forgotten a lot.

Another big reason for the update now was that when I started writing at the end of 2021, I placed the story a few years in the future in 2029. I made up a war in Poland in the summer of 2028 vs the Russians for Brock to fight in. Now in 2024 we have had two major wars breakout, one in Ukraine the other in Israel. Both countries that I talk about throughout the stories. Technology has also changed with AI and the like. So, it was time to update those details. Accurate details are important as they allow the reader to believe what they are reading and buy into the fantasy, so my editor and I work hard to get them right.

Pete

Readers,

The third story in the Sex Date Series has been updated, Zack & Rebekah a Sex Date. A Fresh edit that improves the flow and I expanded a couple of scenes.

This is a short 3 chapter story where Zack and Rebekah meet at her house for a fun sex date, a date that has a twist or two in the end. This occurs after the events of Brothel Night where they officially met. No need to have read the first two stories but being familiar with the idea and characters would not hurt. One chapter of setting the scene and two of’ fun’ with our heroes followed by an epilogue covering the happenings of some of the other characters. Includes two AI images.

Feedback is always appreciated.

Pete

Readers,
Some of you might have noticed a 'Chapter 6' added to Brothel Night, this is the old epilogue. My editor Steve and I have been working on series edits. Expect one more small update to Brothel Nights chapters next week.

Brock Acts of Passion and Violence was edited in early March for clarity and text errors but nothing new story wise. I think it reads better now. A very fun story that wraps up the year 2029.

I’ll write more about Brothel Night next week. But I smoothed out some text and added some scenes and spices up others. Chapter 6 was the previous epilogue and BN now has a new much shoter epilogue with a cross over character from another story.

Expect all stories in the Sex Date Series to get a new edit in the next couple of months.

Pete

Readers,

If you like my work and would like to vote. Two of my stories. Wilkens and Friends and Brock Acts of Passion and Violence are nominaated. You can vote here.

Much thanks. Vote for the stores you enjoyed last year. In the Classic catagory I recomend POW - Prisoner of the Widows by Joe J, one of the finest stories I have read.

Pete