Pete Fox: Blog

Readers,
Some of you might have noticed a 'Chapter 6' added to Brothel Night, this is the old epilogue. My editor Steve and I have been working on series edits. Expect one more small update to Brothel Nights chapters next week.

Brock Acts of Passion and Violence was edited in early March for clarity and text errors but nothing new story wise. I think it reads better now. A very fun story that wraps up the year 2029.

I’ll write more about Brothel Night next week. But I smoothed out some text and added some scenes and spices up others. Chapter 6 was the previous epilogue and BN now has a new much shoter epilogue with a cross over character from another story.

Expect all stories in the Sex Date Series to get a new edit in the next couple of months.

Pete

Readers,

If you like my work and would like to vote. Two of my stories. Wilkens and Friends and Brock Acts of Passion and Violence are nominaated. You can vote here.

Much thanks. Vote for the stores you enjoyed last year. In the Classic catagory I recomend POW - Prisoner of the Widows by Joe J, one of the finest stories I have read.

Pete

Readers
Just a quick note as I have not posted any story chapters. I took a break after the conclusion of Home Nudity Experiment. I am at work on the next chaptes but will be early summer due to the complex nature of the next book/s.

My latest story is up as a nominee for best incest on the Cliterous Awards. Top 10 move on the finals. https://clitoridesawards.org/view_nominees.php?cat=18

Pete

Dear Readers,

Now would be a good time with the New Years holiday to give this book a reread. I have read all 14 chapters again this week and so has my editor, Steve. Or please read the book for the first time. It looks great downloaded on a tablet or on your phone.

With the completion of book 1 of the Home Nudity Experiment it was time to go back and edit, revise and word smith. Edits have been done to chapters 1 to 11. I posted the first chapter in July, 6 months ago. My style of writing is I just put pen to paper with a couple of goals and write. I literally let the characters interact on the page and see what happens. As my editor Steve comments these characters have depth and motivation. Yes there is sex among family and friends. But hopefully it all makes sense. The characters are imperfect and the idea in itself that mere nudity with liberal boundaries can solve their problems is problematic as you will read.

My goal with each chapter is to surprise you, the reader. This is fiction so go with it, but also question the characters motivations and choices. Look for clues as to what is coming. This a character driven story with some sex along the the way, yes there is sex in each chapter.

Along the way were learn Bob is in a National Guard Special Forces unit scheduled to go back to Afghanistan. Bob’s sexy archaeologist sister gets a job offer from a secret military unit in Colorado Springs (Fanfiction SG1 teaser). JoAnn, Bobs wife, we learn has an incestuous past. The 4 kids all have issues and mix it up with the family in bed and out of as they figure out their sexuality. Then there is Pastor Scott and his family who jump into the deep end with home nudity and all that follows. Big boobs and adult breasfeding. There are friends who join along with relatives, Bob's and JoAnn's parents. This story starts in November 2005. Bonus, starting in chapter 11 to 14, I start to experiment with AI generated character art giving the readers some character nudes.

The story does not wrap up with chapter 14. There are loose ends. I envision 3 books total. A 3-act story with book 2 / act 2 getting darker and crazier.

So, I wish you a Happy New Year, 2024.

Pete

Readers,

The final chapters of Book 1 are being posted. Chapter 13 today, 14 Thursday, and a short epilogue on Friday will close out book 1 and the first act.

The story is really a fun telling of what happens when a normal American family turns to a self help book with dubious ideas for help. Based on an original 2-chapter story from another author I gave the characters backstory and depth and had fun with writing a fun believable sexy story. Credit to my editor Steve for all the edits and suggestions. Later on, I even added a few pieces of AI character art.

I anticipate a 3 Act story. This will not be one of those never ending 189 chapter SOL books that won’t die. Book 2, which will cover the first part of 2006 is just an idea in my head and requires more reading and research. Yes, for a historical piece like this I read and Google doing my research, so I get the details right, that takes time.

So if you want a fun read. 117K words or 260 Word pages of sexy fun and life with an American family and their friends circa 2005 give Wilkins and Friends a look. More to come.

Feedback and helpful comments appreciated.

Pete