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Chapter 16 - Home Nudity Experiment Posted – Final Chapter

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Readers,

As I wrote previously, I felt there was more to tell in this story to finish out the year 2005. A month ago, Chapter 15 was published. Now Chapter 16 has been posted. This chapter’s 12,000 words primarily deal with Monica, Bob’s other sister. The story digs into her past and how that affected her parents’ decisions not to invite family members to participate in social nudity and/or the swinging lifestyle. There are twists and I even managed to surprise my editor. The book length story is compete.

The chapter is a little longer than normal as I also attempted to wrap up, for now, other storylines. There is a lot of dialog, and some fun sex scenes, but this is a character focused chapter that ends New Year’s Eve 2005/06. When I write I try to do what makes sense to the plot and characters and have fun at the same time. So sorry, if some of you are disappointed certain characters didn’t do certain things.

I have also updated the Epilogue to reflect events that took place in Chapters 15 & 16. So even if you previously read the Epilogue take the time to do so again. It’s not long and you will be rewarded with a peek at 2006.

Again, feedback is appreciated. After a reader noticed a couple of typos, I edited chapters 4-10 last week so all of the chapters except the first 3 have been updated this year. There will be a book 2, I just don’t know when.

Pete

Wilkins and Friends Home Nudity – Chapter 15 added

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Readers,

Surprise. I just posted Chapter 15 to Wilkins and Friends Home Nudity Experiment. As the chapter starts, we are still at the nudist resort in FL. When I closed out the story last December, I felt there were still some encounters yet to be told. Mothers and sons, dads and daughters and more along with some unanswered questions to be resolved. 10,000 words of fun.

Another reason I am posting this chapter now is that it has been a very busy year so far for me and I have not had time nor inspiration for Book 2 yet, though I have written a few thousand words. Instead, I did a lot of edits to this book and on my Sex Date Series. So, for now this chapter and probably chapter 16 to follow.

After Chp 15 posted I made a couple of edits to the Epilogue, scene change.

Starting with Chapter 11, I have been experimenting with AI created character art. Plus the cover.

This has been my most popular story to date by view count. Thank you for reading and voting.

Thanks to my editor Steve for the edits and timely turnaround.

Feedback is always appreciated.

Pete

Happy 4th - Story updates Sex Date Series and Home Nudity

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Readers,

Happy Independence Day (America) long weekend,

If you are looking for something fun to read this long holiday weekend (In the US). I have recently, with my editor Steves help, updated, edited, and in some stories expanded the erotic (sex) parts of all 9 of the Sex Date series stories. I started in March with Acts of Passion and just finished updating and expanding A Steele Family Weekend, which also has a new epilogue. I also published a new story Memorial Day about Brock's war experiences in Poland in 2028. All my stories have a good balance of sex and plot as I aim to have a good S E X scene in each chapter, if not multiple. But I also try and be creative and not write the same scenes over and over.

If you are looking for stories that are true to life in detail and emotions, I think my work might be for you. My stories are character driven. That means I strive to be true to the nature of the characters and I strive to get the details and emotions right. If I’m going to ask you to suspend disbelief in the fantasy parts, I owe it to the reader to build a story on a stable foundation of details. For example, in the Wilkins and Friends Family Nudity story all the NFL football game scores are correct, I even check the weather and the news headlines for late 2005. The Sex Date series takes place in the 2028 to 2029 time frame so I do my best to imagine the technology and how things would look just a few years from now. My editor does his best to check me.

Those of you waiting for the next Home Nudity book, that is my next project. I wrote some stuff earlier this year but it’s not ready. I intend to go back and expand Chapter 14 and add a couple of special scenes to wrap up the year. I rushed the story to finish before the end of 2023. I have also done several edits on the last few chapters, not posted yet. So, expect that in the next couple of months. Work is busy so I have less time to write.

Enjoy,

Pete

New story Memorial Day Remembrance posted - Sex Date Series

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Readers,
My new story in the Sex Date Series Memorial Day – Remembrance has posted.

I wrote in the first Hannah and Zack Sex Date story back in August of 2020 about a fictional war in Poland that took place in the summer of 2028. I just made it up, why not 2028 was 8 years in the future. Almost 2 years before the Ukraine – Russian War started in Feb 2022. In early 2022, when I was deep into writing about the events of my fictional 2028-29 characters, I had no idea how history was to play out with the war still going on in Ukraine. So I skipped writing about Memorial Day weekend 2028. Could there be a war in 2028 in Poland? I hope not, but the possibility exists.

In the last few weeks, I finally felt I had a story idea and was able to write about what happened to Brock that July of 2028 with more clarity now that a real war has been going on for over 2 years, I understood what the new modern battlefield could look like a few years from now. I did my best to get the knowable details right of equipment, uniforms, and feelings, even studying how tantra sessions work.

I used the backdrop of Memorial Day for Brock, Bob, and Zack to reflect and honor those fictional events and have little fun at the same time. In the story I also explore a new type of stress therapy, tantra, and include a couple of crossover characters from the Wilkins and Friends Home Nudity story.

I hope you enjoy this short story. I am a Veteran myself and enjoyed writing it. I have also spent a number of years in Poland and regularly visit and have friends in Ukraine constantly under threat. I did my best to imagine how and why a short violent campaign might play out.

This morning, I went out and helped plant flags next to the headstones of local Veterans at our cemetery. It was a good experience, and I will now continue to do so each year I am in town.

As always, thanks to my editor Steve for the good edits and feedback.

Pete

Thank you for the Clit Awards Votes

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Readers,

First a thank you to those who took the time to vote in the Clit awards. And welcome to the new followers I have picked up. Two of my stories made the final cut for the 2023 year. The Wilkins and Friends Home Nudity got a 3rd in Best Incest story category. Brock Acts of Passion and Violence came in 5th place in the same category. Both stories have recently been reedited to fix errors update prose etc. New cover art too. Thanks for my volunteer editor Steve who helped with both. If you have not read either in the last year you might be surprised.

Thanks for the votes. I am currently working on a short story in the Sex Date Series called Memorial Day about well Memorial Day in 2029, will be violent and sexy I hope and thoughtful. Not sure if I will make my end of May planned posting date yet.

Pete

 

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