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THREE – Daddy Finds Out - Chapter 4 posted

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Readers,

We are halfway through THREE, a historical erotica story that takes place in Iowa in 2024 during tornado season. Historical, because to the best of my abilities, I stick to the historical facts, weaving my fiction in between. Erotic because our protagonist, Tom, is an imperfect conservative Iowa farmer, former National Guard soldier, now a volunteer fireman, he has been emotionally absent, and now he is led down the path of finding out his THREE daughters are working in adult industries. Tom, realizes he needs to change, to open up, if he wants to get his girls and wife back.

This story is NOT for you if you are looking for a stroke story. Don’t even read it. Yes, there are graphic depictions of male fantasies and some sex, but often it cuts away. The story has three main characters, Tom, as mentioned, who does not respond in the best way to this news. Next are his three daughters; they have made adult choices for their own reasons and they love daddy. The other character is the weather; the story brackets the historic Minden tornado of April 26, 2024, and the Greenfield tornado in May 2024. I have spent a lot of time trying to get the details right. Yet the story is fun, there are twists and turns, Tom responds like a man who is imperfect, yet loves his girls and wants to be a better father. He is also mad that he is being led along by someone he calls the ‘puppet master’, while revealing his own dark past.

Now in Chapter 4 of 6, the story gets darker, into the kink side of Iowa. If you are offended by graphic depictions of kink, STOP reading. Go read a non sex story. At the same time, it's fun, and if you are here for a stroke story, you will be disappointed. There is a lot of dialogue and Tom’s thoughts. He listens to conservative news and podcasts, so if this offends you, go elsewhere. It's also not a daily journal; the story skips along, hitting the fun highlights in between the two big tornados, and there is farm life too, never stops, planting those crops. (Just watch the current weather news, on Ryan Y’all or Max Velocity on YouTube, it’s a crazy time of year.)

If this sounds good to you, keep reading ALL the way to the end of the Epilogue, which posts on the 24th with Chapter 6. There is also a historical note at the very end.

Thanks for reading, and to the couple of you who sent me your guesses as to who the puppet master is, thank you.

Pete Fox

New Story, THREE – Daddy Finds Out

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Readers,
Edit, as of thr 14th, I have had two messages with guesses of whom the pupet master is, both wrong...send me your guesses if you like.

Storm season has arrived in the Midwest and so has my new six part story, THREE – Daddy Finds Out. Tom Marshall, an Iowa farmer, former soldier, and volunteer fireman, has been an emotionally distant father and husband. Over the course of several weeks, he is led down a path of discovery as his three daughters’ secret adult lives are laid bare. At the same time, tornadoes explode across Iowa in this historical 2024 setting. People without flaws are boring.

Tom, he’s not perfect and he does not always respond as a dad should. He does listen and learns, trying to change. This is not a stroke story but instead a character-driven story of discovery and redemption, with the sexy bits tossed in. Six chapters with a few illustrations.

Posting will happen on Fridays and Tuesdays until complete.

Please take your time to read the entire story before casting a thoughtful vote or leaving a comment.

And don’t forget to vote in the Clitoride Awards. I have a couple of stories on the list.

Pete Fox

Short story update and vote

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Readers
Just a quick update. I am currently working on a new story about a father who discovers his three daughters kinky secrets as he deals with farm life. Takes place in Iowa during tornado season in 2024 and is a redemption story at its heart. Hopefully publishing in late April or early May.

Voting for the 2025 Clitorides awards are open until the end of April. I have several stories among the nominations so if you like my work go ahead and vote, if you are allowed. There are some great stories among the nominees.

Pete Fox

Old is New – Recently Posted edits to four older stories

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Readers,

Working with my editor, we edited four of my older stories from the 2020-21 time frame when I just started writing stories and was still finding my way, and before editor Steve and other tools. I had less than 100 followers back then, not the 464 I have today. If the weather in your state or country has you hunkered down trying to stay warm or dry give one of these stories a try. They are shorter in length, sexy and kinky. I was traveling in Asia for several weeks and enjoyed reading and editing them.

All the stories now have updated cover art or cover art for the first time. They read well and are fun, I think.

First up are two stories that go together and are early attempts, they are first person ‘true story’ telling. A Massage with Friends is a short one act story, I watch as a friend's daughter massages her dad while her mom and I get closer. The next is A Christmas Swap with Friends, we get together with a my friends and a family they know for a family swap. Both experiences were very personal to write about, and I held onto them for a while before posting.

Next a short story, a first person experience in Holland in the 1990s that I rewrote and added to with the author's permission, who is no longer active. Dutch Daughter Our First Swing in Holland. New cover art and smoothed out some text and flow.

Lastly, I just reposted, an early fanfiction that I asked SOL author Lubrcian / Uncle Bob if I could write a short story with the characters from Prick Van Winkle, which is a Classic Clitoride nominee this year. For my story, one of my first, Lubrican gave some writing advice on show vs tell, I’m grateful. Bob Prick Van Winkle Family Date Night. Four of the characters get together for a partner swap, including Bob. I love in the original stories sense of humor, I laughed often at the twisted erotic fairytale so I tried to have a little fun myself. My story has new cover art and original art in one of the chapters and the epilogue.

Late edit. I added 4 sexy images to Sex Before the Storm Wheele of Time Short Stories and updated text. Brothel Night A Sex Date Story, has been edited and smoothed out with a new cover.

If you like my writing and 464 of you do, I promise you will find something to like in these older stories.

I should mention that last year I wrote additional chapters for Wilkins and Friends A Home Nudity Experiment, Book 2, which I closed out. After that, I wrote an erotic prepper nudist short story that takes place before the Covid19 pandemic called The Compound. While traveling, I wrote a short story that takes place 3 days before war breaks out in the Central Pacific in late 2028 called Red Sky Dawn. Both The Compound and Red Sky Dawn hit some people's nerves as the scores went up and down, as they are more in the world we live in and political. Lastly the Sex Date series, which has nine stories about teenage sex dating, in the future (2028), which gets close every year since I wrote the first story in 2020.

I hope this list helps you have a good weekend or week of reading. Additionally, check out the Clitoride Nominees list, bottom left on the home page, for some reading ideas.

Pete Fox

New Short Story Red Sky Dawn Posted

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Readers,

Red Sky Dawn has posted and has some characters from the Home Nudity Universe. I enjoyed writing it, that’s all that matters. This year the theme is short stories, with apparently unpopular themes like Covid, war, and whatever else I choose to explore. In Red Sky Dawn, the hero is a young US Air Force meteorologist on Guadalcanal in 2028 and is preparing to head home, as China’s invasion of Taiwan looms. Kathy Wilkins and friends survive in the jungle and share each other in the hours before D-Day, unknown to them. The story is illustrated. Do me a favor and don’t vote until you have read both chapters, there were 33 votes before the 2nd and final chapter even dropped, and some within 5 min of the story posting, so that tells me something. Any follow-up stories will be handled in the same format.

Additionally, with the help of my editor, we edited two of my first and most popular stories, A Massage with Friends and A Christmas Swap with Friends, the follow-up. Both with new cover art. Be kind, they were two of my first stories, but after revisions and editing fun little stories.

As always thanks to my editor Steve for his quick turnaround and suggestions.

Nothing on the writing schedule right now, maybe a follow-up to Red Sky or something else, like a western or WW II short story.

Pete Fox

 

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