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Readers,
Chapter 22 has posted, 12,600 words. America, Happy 4th of July weekend reading. The Home Nudity story steps up the intensity as the cast globetrots. From North Carolina to Greece to the Vatican and back to Boone.
At the end of Chapter 21 Bob’s CIA sister told him they were to deliver the Turkish asset to Greece. Rolling into Chapter 22 JoAnn’s sister Brooke and her daughter Mia pay an overnight visit.
A new book, Sacred Bonds: Incest as Divine Pedagogy in the Ancient World is introduced along with the books sexy author Egyptologist Dr. Eleanor Hughs. Published before Casual Family Nudity: The Answer to Today's Problems.
In Northern Greece after the mission is complete, brother and sister hook up with an old friend and the relationship is taken to a new level. I won’t spoil it. Hannah pays a visit to the Vatican archives with Samantha, makes some new friends, and participates in an ancient Pagen ritual. Back to Boone more family time with a returning friend.
Now, 5 months into the Home Nudity Experiment, late October 2005 to March 2006. If you have read all 21 chapters to date with a skeptic’s eye, I hope you see what is coming; I choose my words with care, they have meaning. My story style is character driven story telling with some room for ‘fun’, but my goal is to be true to the characters, this is not a stroke story. Hence the Dr Heny Jones IV and Stargate Characters mixed in. By now readers should be asking themselves how this will turn out, what are the potential downfalls, what clues have been given, and even ask yourself, are there families in your communities secretly living this lifestyle? Hopefully, I am giving the reader enough information to decide for themselves in the end. There is an end by the way.
I used AI as an assistant and that made research a lot easier, and in this chapter, to create a fictional argument and book title. For what, you will see. I strive to ground the story in historically accurate details from the weather to weapons to sports scores and news headlines and so on. AI has cut down on the time I spend hunting for information, so I was able to put this chapter out in about 4 weeks vs 6 to 8 with the help of my editor Steve proofing sections along the way.
And thank you to you my readers. As of this blog post the story has over 100,000 downloads. The number does not really tell me how many people are reading. But this series is the most read of my attempts.
Enjoy the chapter, and don’t have a heart attack.
Your feedback is always appreciated.
Pete
Ps my friend DT Iverson has a new 4th of July story up celebrating Veterans. This year the story is Go For Broke about the 442nd Infantry in WW2. Very well written. Give it a look.
Readers,
Good news, Chapter 21 of the Home Nudity Experiment has been posted. Just over 9000 words of fun.
At the end of Chapter 20 Bob had been wounded in action in Iraq, then received an invitation from the CIA. Hannah was on her way to Athens for an orgy on top of the Acropolis with her friends from Colorado Springs (Stargate SG1 storyline). JoAnn was doing her best to manage the home front as Oksana got ready to move home to reunite with her husband.
In this new chapter we start off with Hannah recovering from the orgy in Athens, trying to make sense of what happened. The story pivots to several short home front scenes climaxing in a sensual affirmation circle for Oksana as only kinky home nudists know how to do. Lastly in Iraq Bob joins his sister Monica for a CIA mission, then connect in a very special way in the mission’s aftermath. Setting the stage of the events of April 2006.
As I have said before I only know where and when Book 2 will end, not what happens in between or even the last scene of Book 2. Yes, this story has an ending. This is a journey and character driven. I do lots of research to ground the story in the time that it takes place and make it interesting.
Since the last chapter I have been in and out of the AI rabbit hole. Basically, AI does not have the spark to write original content and its usefulness for writers is limited by lack of memory storage. What it can do is rapidly provide research data and do some proofing. In this story I used AI in this way. None of the scenes were written with AI but it was used for research.
Thank you for reading. Your feedback is always appreciated.
Pete
I wrote a Memorial Day story last year. Erotica meets one of my stories characters remembering a war in the not so distant future.
Other recommendations. The Wall and this great POW story by Joe J and DT Iverson has several great memorial stories.
I am currently reading Wilbur Smith's book The Birds of Prey... a fun romp in the 17th Century so far with a fair amount of vived, kinky sex scenes, along with all the drama. Give it a look if you want something more mainstream.
Take a moment this long weekend in the US to pause and remember those who have been lost in the service of the country.
Update, I am hard at work on Chapter 21 of Home Nudity and hope to have it out by late June.
Pete
Readers,
Chapter 20 has posted. This chapter we have a sex date, a new family joins the group. Hannah goes deeper into the mysteries surrounding the voice in her head and the new job. A mission goes wrong for Bob in Iraq.
I also have one story, Memorial Day, in the Clit Awards contest. Give it a read and upvote if you have time. You have until April 30 to vote on stories.
I have also been messing around with AI grok to create erotic NSFW stories. I have found AI is really good for research, original thought not so much. AI stories are still flat and often repetitive but I may post one or two soon.
The other story in the Sex Date series I have some ideas for the next chapter in 2030.
Thank you for reading.
Pete Fox
Readers,
A little shameless plug. My story Memorial Day - Remembrance is a nominee (wonder who did that) if you are one the 100 people who read my story about war and love (sex) and enjoyed it consider giving it a vote. Just the nomincation period top 10 in each catagory go through. There are also many fine writers like DT Iverson and Joe J who write excellent stories that are nominated.
Clit Awards link here. You do have to have a registered account.
Go read and vote!
Pete
ps busy coming up with fun plot twists for Chapter 20 of Home Nudity now.
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