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I have had a few request to expand on the differences between Mennonites and the Amish. This will be added to the preface and go out in the next update.
Chapter three is in work. I expect it will take me several weeks to complete it.
If anyone has knowledge of real police procedures. Please send me an email. I have some questions.
I've uploaded a revised Prologue and Chapter 1. I've also added a preface. The preface gives some background on Mennonites and how they differ from The Amish. It also explains some differences between conservative and moderate Mennonites. I hope that you can take the time to read it.
Several of my readers have emailed about errors in my story. From punctuation to Milk House sanitation. I think that all such errors have been corrected. Please let me know what I've missed.
Chapter two is coming very soon, probably Sunday.
Chapter three is still in work.
I never expected that so many people would like my story.
It probably shows that TFD is my first story.
The relationship between Rebecca and her mother is loosely based on that of my wife and her mother. My mother in law was very supportive of my wife.
Chapter two is with my beta readers. After I get their feedback, I will revise as necessary and post it.
Chapter three is in work.
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