Eddie Davidson: Blog

It is my strong belief that it is unwise to hold strong beliefs.

It is also my strong belief that the same people you see at BDSM meet ups, are usually the core rank and file at Ren Fairs, and the outfits have a lot of cross-over - big titty women with white tavern blouses, and tight corsets, leather vests, etc.

I will be taking a short hiatus from posting for the next two weeks (most likely) but I am working on a new story. I'll post it when it is complete. I am up to chapter 33 and about half way over.

I have a question for my readers (And those in general who care to offer constructive feedback)

**SPOILER ALERT** read no further if you don't want a spoiler - but keep in mind this happens early on in the story. It's context for the question. Skip past this to "Leaving Spoiler Zone in bold if you want.

The general premise of the story is that a woman catches her son masturbating to BDSM. She assures him it's perfectly normal. She's gregarious, fun-loving, single mom.

She tells him she's always been curious about being tied up, and asks if he'll do it just so she can try it out. At first, it's fairly harmless, fully clothed, but quickly she's like "well, let's do it right...I don't care if you see me naked.."

and it steamrolls into a fun story about a woman who isn't a "Submissive" in the classic sense, but she does like getting tied up and the snot spanked out of her.

Their relationship becomes a bit of a power-exchange as they work out the limits/boundaries. That's fun to write about.

***LEAVING SPOILER ZONE***

By Chapter 33, they go to a Ren Faire, where they see sword swallowers, ribald performers, whip shows, and all sorts of semi-raunchy but not quite sexual performances.

I heard a performer at a Ren Faire once say "You only get the jokes you are supposed to get". He'd tell a dirty joke, but the kids in the audience wouldn't get it because it went over their head. If you are old enough to figure out what he is talking about - you are old enough to get it.

I am going to spend about 5-10 chapters on this day at the ren faire.

My question: Would it be fun to write a standalone about a BDSM couple who go to a ren fair just as a day in the life?

My concern is if you wait until chapter 33, you may not be excited about this, because it's not very sexual/wild like most of the story is up until this point?

As a great example of why I am asking, I wrote this story "Keeping the Babysitter in Line".

https://storiesonline.net/s/26845/keeping-the-babysitter-in-line

It's a 55 chapter love letter to growing up in the 80s and the quirky girls of the time with the big glasses that turned my screws as a young lad. The main character is a little too old to be babysat, but his mom sends him, and he has a crush on her anyway so he doesn't protest.

It turns out though, this older girl also has a secret life with her family where one weekend out of the month, they practice BDSM and it just so happens to be that weekend when he arrives. It's too late to send him home.

I loved writing this story.

Somewhere in the middle, I had the bright idea to write about the Rocky Horror Picture Show experience in the 1980s. It was GLORIOUS.

But I feel many people won't read 30 chapters in to get to that rich, delicious center and read it.

I've often thought I should extract those chapters and rewrite it a little so it could be a standalone story.

I feel erotic about going to RHPS, or the Ren Fair is fun stuff, because it is what people who practice BDSM regularly might do. It's not all "sex, sex,sex" - sometimes it's those neat events that sort of connect you to other freaky people as well.

Should I split it out? or save it as an easter egg for people who slog through 30 chapters to get there and discover?

Humperdink: The guy who never had an unexpressed thought: A short story.

Humperdink never writes stories and shares them. Instead, he accesses his free account to read stories. Humperdink never reads story codes or descriptions.

He reads a 17 chapter story he does not like. Instead of just moving on and finding one he does like, he decides "You know what the author would appreciate? How about if I email him to tell him why I, Humperdink, did not like his story and specifically mention the themes that were clearly in the codes as the reason. I cannot have a thought that I did not share. I am sure the author will want to read the reason that I, Humperdink, did not enjoy the story that they spent hours writing and editing."

Humperdink wastes his own time sending it. He wastes the authors time reading it. Then the author wrote this story which wasted your time. Please blame Humperdink. Do not be like Humperdink.

In the first half of July I may have to go on a 2 week hiatus of posting.

However, I have several stories to follow "Hands Full of Innocence".

I normally get a lot of feedback on stories like this but not much. I wanted to do a story that captured a little of what it was like on vacation for me in the deep south, and also tell a story about a teenager who is obsessed with tits and ass.

It's kind of what they call an "ENM" story or embarrassed nude male, but also ENF because there are times the women are nude too. I also intended to see where this story led me without trying to force it down a path and it surprised me.

I believed initially Brunna would be the focus, and while she is persistent this story slowly evolves into the Aunt wanting a young boy to "own" - but not like a cruel domme. She wanted to teach him to be a man/to fuck and to serve her.

She didn't feminized him or cuckold him, or humiliate him (really). She trained him to be an attentive lover, to eat pussy, to do things he wanted to do anyway. He just needed 'permission' from himself or someone.

I had fun with the bet at the end, and there are still two more chapters to post.

I believe that will be it until my hiatus is over. I still have other stories to post. I am up to chapter 27 on my latest story. It's not even halfway over yet. It's about a gregarious and outgoing woman who catches her son whacking to bondage porn. Instead of freaking out, she is like "Wow, I always wanted to be tied up...tell you what. I saw you jerk it, I'll let you get even. You can tie me up in the garage once so I can see what it is like"

That's where it begins. It zigs and zags from there.

There are two stories I've never finished on this site. NIS: Naked in Summer Camp and Visiting Aunt Scarlet.

I lost my inspiration for those stories and I frequently think about going out and putting an ending on them. However, they would probably feel "forced".

Writing stories solo is a lonely process. Once I get to the end of the story, I know how it turns out. I am always tempted to just rush to the end so I can start some new and exciting adventure.

I call it "landing the plane" and no matter how you try - it's really hard to find a place to end if everyone in the story is still alive. There is more to tell.

I have a lot of stories where I reach a point that an ENTIRELY NEW story arc would begin if I kept writing. I fade to black and offer an epilogue about how their lives continued, or else i'd still be writing the first story I ever began.

As many of you know, Vulgus is probably my favorite author on the site. Many of his stories were written so well but there was always a "just one more chapter!!" feeling to them.

Which perhaps if he wrote an encore, I'd want yet another.

So here is what I am willing to consider;

Either YOU write the next chapter to any of my stories and either publish it yourself on here, or send to me and I'll add it to the end of the story if I think it fits.

OR send me 2-3 paragraphs outlining what happens in a SINGLE CHAPTER of about 14-18 pages typed. If the scope is too broad I can't do that. If it's another day or two in the life I probably could.

Tell me why you think this one deserves one more chapter and I'll do that.

I've been planning to put projects aside for a bit and go back and re-spell check my old stories. I've gotten better at that over the years. I just recently reviewed "My Sons Dared Me" and found several grammatical errors and at the time I went through that with a fine tooth comb.

My most recent story that I am working on is up to 17 chapters. The title is "Call Me Misty" - Misty has three teenage sons and a daughter. She's an independent woman with a sassy, fun demeanor. She catches her eldest son stroking to bondage porn. He is mortified but she doesn't see the big deal "everybody does it". Offering to prove to him that she is a good sport and showing some interest in the pictures - she points out they have a Cherry Picker in the garage and asks to see what it feels like to be tied up.

It's been fun writing but I need to take a little break - so I am willing to consider this as a side project while I wait for a little more inspiration on this story.

On the horizon; One of my most beloved stories is "Do you have a big dick, why not?"
https://storiesonline.net/s/20017/do-you-have-a-big-dick

It's about a shy teenage boy who meets a sheet teenage girl and gets an invite to her house. She warns him her family is strange but doesn't warn him HOW strange. Her mother and sister make their living webcamming and they do fetish shows instead of straight sex.

It's actually not uncommon in real life.

In any case, the mom is a former stripper past her prime, big tits, long bleached blonde hair. She asks him if he has a big dick when she first meets him.

"Because you don't look like you have money or cocaine, so if you don't have a big cock, I dont' know why you are talking to me."

Which, is something an actual featured dancer in a strip club once told me. If you couldn't do anything for her - don't waste her time.

A very patient reader, suggested based on my last blog that I revisit that story, and write a sequel. This would be several years later , and center around the main characters little brother and sister who were sort of whisked away to the aunt's house during the follow up story and never really developed.

https://storiesonline.net/s/20126/it-is-not-cheating-if

We'll see how things evolved after that.

My influences in writing include Vulgus, MaryS, Vanessa Evans, Amanda Serve, Mike McGifford, ByDaSea.

I have written stories set in Post-Civil War Reconstruction, Fantasy settings like Game of Thrones, but 98% of them are in Middle America suburbs or trailer parks because I write what I know.

Most of my stories involve BDSM, Humiliation and all have some aspect of incest and taboo.

However, I don't think those are a "genre". They are on SOL, but to me they are more like a theme or element. Bondage is what is happening during the story, sex is a byproduct but none of that is what the story is really about.

I often enjoy writing stories where someone who has little to no understanding of BDSM is suddenly introduced to it. You could call that a "Coming of Age" story which is most certainly a genre but it isn't always applicable because the main character may already be of age.

The main characters are often flawed individuals, who are painfully shy or extremely bitchy and controlling. I enjoy that. I enjoy starting them with the flaw, using it as part of the story and then by the "Act 3" of the story they have made the weakness into a strength or evolved into something new.

You could also make a case for "Fish out of water" stories. The Nephew who visits his naughty aunt and horny cousins is a recurring theme.

You could make the case that some of my stories involve non-consent, but almost all of them are more consensual in nature. I don't mind a good blackmail story, but the main character always has a choice. I seldom blackmail any characters who weren't reprehensible to begin with. If I do blackmail a relatively good person, I usually give them a triumphant victory over their blackmailer.

I guess you could also make the case that many of my stories involve people dynamically developing a power exchange relationship. I don't think there are many authors who play with that theme. (If you know of one let me know).

What I mean by this is (As an example) is Do You Have a Big Dick, Why Not?
https://storiesonline.net/s/20017/do-you-have-a-big-dick

In that story, the shy girl that the main character likes has a secret life at home. She and her mom and older sister are camgirls. The reason for the title was the mom asks if him a question about the size of his cock. She implies that if he doesn't have a big dick, money or coke, then why is he wasting her time?

It was something a stripper asked me years ago.

In the story, the relationship evolves to him being sort of a "manager"/"Dom" and they establish boundaries/limits and develop a power exchange relationship of give and take where everyone gets what they wanted out of the story.

One of the more recent examples would be "Horny But Not Desperate" where the main character meets a mother whose daughter wanted to learn submission, and they also have a dynamic set of rules that they evolve as the daughter grows in her understanding and interest.

https://storiesonline.net/s/30858/horny-but-not-desperate.

I also write NIS (Naked in School) stories, which I consider a genre, but I don't write enough of them to say that is my niche. I also tend to write a certain kind of NIS story that is unusual for the genre. Mine often involve more kinky aspects than most. (NIS: Puppy Student Program).

https://storiesonline.net/s/18017/puppy-student-program-nis

I kind of missed the ball on this one The acronym could have been PIS - Puppy in School, which would have been double entendre fun.

Are you able to articulate a "Genre" for most of my stories without simply picking a category of fetish?


I'd be curious what thoughts you have if you are an avid reader. I am surprised I have 850 readers but probably only 3 or 4 ever email regularly with any sort of feedback. I definitely appreciate constructive thoughts.

I don't have to have a genre label. I may never have one, but I'd be curious if I do without realizing it. Is there a word for the type of stories that I tell?