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30,000 downloads, 28 chapters published, Over 140,00 words with 1 chapter left to the exciting conclusion of an epic tale.
https://storiesonline.net/s/30445/daddy-i-was-naughty
The average score is 6.96. I wrote this over the course of a few months of my life. It's based on an idea that Mike McGifford told me once.
The main character's daughter works at Hooters, she is flighty, cute, and comes to her daddy for some money to solve her problems. He and his wife bought her a car, but she hasn't moved out. If you are a parent with grown kids or know some, You probably know the scenario.
Funny thing about Heather, is that she likes to be punished. She really enjoys it, and that's the twist. When she gets punished she straightens up and flies right. Lots of twists and turns in this story.
I know there is not enough time in the day to offer feedback to every author, and sometimes all you want to say is "Keep it up".
I wanted to observe though that as author I do really enjoy it when people take the time to write to me about my story, offer suggestions, maybe a grammatical fix that I missed, or in general feedback.
I have written and concluded the story, so it's just in editing at this stage. It's still nice to hear how you would have taken it differently, or questions about the path they are on.
I had considered extending this story well after what I considered to be the 'set up' phase. What I was really going for is a recurring theme in many of my stories.
A kinky situation/scenario where the participants dynamically develop a power exchange relationship and identify their needs/what they want to get out of it, and the limits and boundaries.
A good 80% of my recent stories in the past year probably touch upon that in different ways. (That statistic brought to you by "Numbers I just pulled out of my ass TM" by the way.
Once that foundation is set up, I tend to lose interest in the characters and let them ride off into the sunset to live their new and exciting changed life. Cum Dumpster: Mom has an OnlyFans was a great example of that.
https://storiesonline.net/s/25723/cum-dumpster
I loved the characters. There is literally no reason not to continue writing about their continued amoral, kinky adventures with her son managing her onlyfans site other than "I think I would just start telling you the same things about every day"
I stopped getting feedback about it as well. In fact, I rarely have people look at my back catalog. I was fortunate that DareDevil Mom placed in the clitorides, so that a few people who missed it may go back and experience what I thought was a really neat take on submission.
I just wanted to pontificate for a moment, that I believe in the absence of feedback, the author is left to conclude "people are reading this, but it is such schlocky drek that they aren't passionate enough to comment on it" or they are think "people are reading this, but it's just average and they think I should continue"
I think most of us do thrive on positive reinforcement when it's earned, and constructive feedback to help us grow.
Even some of my favorite prolific authors who I think have it all worked out like Vulgus, probably have days where they are like "Did nobody even read this?"
I would encourage you to give this story a read if you haven't. I'll conclude it tomorrow. There probably won't be a sequel but I think you will enjoy reading these characters like I did writing about them.
Every time I hear Clitorides Awards I think about a story set in one of those alternate realities where women can be nude in public.
"Mom, the Clitorides awards are coming up!"
"Do you really think I have a shot this year?"
(looks down at her big clit)
"Yeah, your clit is huge! If you practice tying string around it for a few hours you'll definitely win the pain endurance competition."
"I do not know. Last year they started using thumb tacks in the competition."
In any case, Thank you to those who voted for my stories this year.
In the Category of Incest Story, I placed for Daredevil Mom.
https://storiesonline.net/s/28906/daredevil-mom
The basic premise is that the mother is a true submissive spirit with an adventurous and very sexual side. She loves to perform dares - not the kind like jumping through hoops of fire. More like flash your tits and dance on the table.
I am proud of this story (And the sequel). I wrote her to be a strong person who likes to do for others and is very giving.
As an example, her son forgot his flip flops at the beach and she thought nothing of giving him her sandals and walking on the really hot pavement to prevent his feet from burning.
She's not a perfect person, but she's also not a shallow, brainless nymphomaniac (even though she knows how to present as one if the occasion calls for it).
I really enjoyed writing that story and honestly, I could have remained in her world for a lot longer and wrote more. I just felt like I told a complete story.
Ending a story is tough. It's like landing a plane.
Unless everyone dies, you usually feel you could take off again and keep going - there is always more to tell. I felt like I added an 'ending' to that story.
Yet, I also felt like I needed to fast forward a few months and check in with her in part two.
https://storiesonline.net/s/27891/dare-devil-mom-the-story
I appreciate getting acknowledged for my writing. I write a lot of stories that really do not fit neatly into a single category. I really don't even consider this an incest story since she never had sex with her offspring and they didn't have sex with each other.
However, I can see why it fell where it did.
I really did not expect the outpouring of supportive comments from readers and authors on this site.
THANK YOU!
I always assume most of my blog posts reach only a handful because I rarely get feedback. Usually, they are little updates on my writing and occasionally something funny (The continuing adventures of the guy who doesn't read story codes).
However, the troll problem is so universal and has become so toxic that people are generally just exhausted of it.
Some had ideas on how to fix it, some had advice not to feed them by acknowledging them, some commiserated but no one disagreed that they contribute nothing and if the disappeared that nothing of value would be lost.
What really bothers me is the 'vigilante troll'. - Self-appointed defenders of what topics/stories are permitted who insist upon harassing and downvoting authors to discourage them. Being quiet about them hasn't worked to stop them - it's only given them tacit permission to continue.
My message to them is: When you grow old enough to get some hair on your balls, you'll realize everyone has some weird fetish or interest. If people are into something you are not - as long as they aren't hurting anyone, leave them be.
if the story is not for you, just move on.
I've said anything I need to say about that topic.
On to another. AI ART - if you are following this topic (And there is generative AI out there writing stories, making music, etc. too) but AI art is really progressing.
Most of those tools don't permit NSFW output, because they would probably be overwhelmed and they are trying to monetize.
As many of you know, I often add illustration to my stories in the form of little captions. I follow the rules of what is and isn't allowed on the site and I try not to overdo it. I enjoy a quick caption because "a picture is worth a 1000 words".
However, I know it's not everyone's cup of tea, so I try to limit it. HOA: Dolphin shores, I had plenty of illustrations available so I have been doing it more there.
With my new story, "Horny But Not Desperate" I do not plan to include many but I am proud of the picture on chapter one.
I wanted to point out that I did include one illustration I made with AI art. I am particularly proud. It wasn't as simple as just typing what I wanted, but it wasn't anywhere nearly as hard as practicing until I had the talent to actually make something like this the old fashioned way.
https://storiesonline.net/s/30858:274018/chapter-1-horny-but-not-desperate
At the top of the story. I thought I'd share it with you.
AI Art - will disrupt and potentially kill a lot of industries like stock photo companies. Just like the Word processor killed typewriters and liquid paper, there are advances that whether you love them or hate them - are here to stay.
I do not want to debate the intrinsic value of it in our society, just wanted to share a cool byproduct of the technology.
I don't know if it's just that society is collapsing and this is a symptom but the toxicity of the user community is getting worse through the activity of a few trolls.
My guess is there's probably about six or seven extremely toxic and vocal trolls on this site(but create multiple accounts)
Their extremely myopic fetish/interest is their only reason for being. Any story that falls outside of that gets their wrath
And by that I mean they feel the need to downvote it, write extremely negative and unconstructive comments and send nasty grams to the author.
I'm all about freedom of speech but we have restrictions on this site to protect the user community.
I don't see any value in someone just writing "your story sucks if this gets your disgusting balls hard" from a freedom of speech standpoint.
(Which a troll recently wrote on my story)
The only thing these kind of comments do is discourage authors, encourage toxicity because it's obviously acceptable, and bring down the quality of the website overall.
I have also noticed more and more stories with author contact and comments turned off.
It's obvious why reader engagement would not be of interest after you get someone named "asdfghk123" sending you a bunch of snotty emails to discourage your writing.
I'm okay with somebody not liking my story. In fact, I know it's not for that's reality.
I'm okay with them commenting the reasons and how it might be better.
It's not an airport though. You don't have to announce your from the story on chapter 6
I would ask that the website moderators consider some approach to getting rid of the most toxic users that contribute nothing but
Trollish bullying.
I know that they're just going to create many many accounts but we've got to do something or they win
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