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WHATS THE ONE STORY OF MINE YOU WANT ONE MORE CHAPTER ON?

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There are two stories I've never finished on this site. NIS: Naked in Summer Camp and Visiting Aunt Scarlet.

I lost my inspiration for those stories and I frequently think about going out and putting an ending on them. However, they would probably feel "forced".

Writing stories solo is a lonely process. Once I get to the end of the story, I know how it turns out. I am always tempted to just rush to the end so I can start some new and exciting adventure.

I call it "landing the plane" and no matter how you try - it's really hard to find a place to end if everyone in the story is still alive. There is more to tell.

I have a lot of stories where I reach a point that an ENTIRELY NEW story arc would begin if I kept writing. I fade to black and offer an epilogue about how their lives continued, or else i'd still be writing the first story I ever began.

As many of you know, Vulgus is probably my favorite author on the site. Many of his stories were written so well but there was always a "just one more chapter!!" feeling to them.

Which perhaps if he wrote an encore, I'd want yet another.

So here is what I am willing to consider;

Either YOU write the next chapter to any of my stories and either publish it yourself on here, or send to me and I'll add it to the end of the story if I think it fits.

OR send me 2-3 paragraphs outlining what happens in a SINGLE CHAPTER of about 14-18 pages typed. If the scope is too broad I can't do that. If it's another day or two in the life I probably could.

Tell me why you think this one deserves one more chapter and I'll do that.

I've been planning to put projects aside for a bit and go back and re-spell check my old stories. I've gotten better at that over the years. I just recently reviewed "My Sons Dared Me" and found several grammatical errors and at the time I went through that with a fine tooth comb.

My most recent story that I am working on is up to 17 chapters. The title is "Call Me Misty" - Misty has three teenage sons and a daughter. She's an independent woman with a sassy, fun demeanor. She catches her eldest son stroking to bondage porn. He is mortified but she doesn't see the big deal "everybody does it". Offering to prove to him that she is a good sport and showing some interest in the pictures - she points out they have a Cherry Picker in the garage and asks to see what it feels like to be tied up.

It's been fun writing but I need to take a little break - so I am willing to consider this as a side project while I wait for a little more inspiration on this story.

On the horizon; One of my most beloved stories is "Do you have a big dick, why not?"
https://storiesonline.net/s/20017/do-you-have-a-big-dick

It's about a shy teenage boy who meets a sheet teenage girl and gets an invite to her house. She warns him her family is strange but doesn't warn him HOW strange. Her mother and sister make their living webcamming and they do fetish shows instead of straight sex.

It's actually not uncommon in real life.

In any case, the mom is a former stripper past her prime, big tits, long bleached blonde hair. She asks him if he has a big dick when she first meets him.

"Because you don't look like you have money or cocaine, so if you don't have a big cock, I dont' know why you are talking to me."

Which, is something an actual featured dancer in a strip club once told me. If you couldn't do anything for her - don't waste her time.

A very patient reader, suggested based on my last blog that I revisit that story, and write a sequel. This would be several years later , and center around the main characters little brother and sister who were sort of whisked away to the aunt's house during the follow up story and never really developed.

https://storiesonline.net/s/20126/it-is-not-cheating-if

We'll see how things evolved after that.

Do I have a Genre?

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My influences in writing include Vulgus, MaryS, Vanessa Evans, Amanda Serve, Mike McGifford, ByDaSea.

I have written stories set in Post-Civil War Reconstruction, Fantasy settings like Game of Thrones, but 98% of them are in Middle America suburbs or trailer parks because I write what I know.

Most of my stories involve BDSM, Humiliation and all have some aspect of incest and taboo.

However, I don't think those are a "genre". They are on SOL, but to me they are more like a theme or element. Bondage is what is happening during the story, sex is a byproduct but none of that is what the story is really about.

I often enjoy writing stories where someone who has little to no understanding of BDSM is suddenly introduced to it. You could call that a "Coming of Age" story which is most certainly a genre but it isn't always applicable because the main character may already be of age.

The main characters are often flawed individuals, who are painfully shy or extremely bitchy and controlling. I enjoy that. I enjoy starting them with the flaw, using it as part of the story and then by the "Act 3" of the story they have made the weakness into a strength or evolved into something new.

You could also make a case for "Fish out of water" stories. The Nephew who visits his naughty aunt and horny cousins is a recurring theme.

You could make the case that some of my stories involve non-consent, but almost all of them are more consensual in nature. I don't mind a good blackmail story, but the main character always has a choice. I seldom blackmail any characters who weren't reprehensible to begin with. If I do blackmail a relatively good person, I usually give them a triumphant victory over their blackmailer.

I guess you could also make the case that many of my stories involve people dynamically developing a power exchange relationship. I don't think there are many authors who play with that theme. (If you know of one let me know).

What I mean by this is (As an example) is Do You Have a Big Dick, Why Not?
https://storiesonline.net/s/20017/do-you-have-a-big-dick

In that story, the shy girl that the main character likes has a secret life at home. She and her mom and older sister are camgirls. The reason for the title was the mom asks if him a question about the size of his cock. She implies that if he doesn't have a big dick, money or coke, then why is he wasting her time?

It was something a stripper asked me years ago.

In the story, the relationship evolves to him being sort of a "manager"/"Dom" and they establish boundaries/limits and develop a power exchange relationship of give and take where everyone gets what they wanted out of the story.

One of the more recent examples would be "Horny But Not Desperate" where the main character meets a mother whose daughter wanted to learn submission, and they also have a dynamic set of rules that they evolve as the daughter grows in her understanding and interest.

https://storiesonline.net/s/30858/horny-but-not-desperate.

I also write NIS (Naked in School) stories, which I consider a genre, but I don't write enough of them to say that is my niche. I also tend to write a certain kind of NIS story that is unusual for the genre. Mine often involve more kinky aspects than most. (NIS: Puppy Student Program).

https://storiesonline.net/s/18017/puppy-student-program-nis

I kind of missed the ball on this one The acronym could have been PIS - Puppy in School, which would have been double entendre fun.

Are you able to articulate a "Genre" for most of my stories without simply picking a category of fetish?


I'd be curious what thoughts you have if you are an avid reader. I am surprised I have 850 readers but probably only 3 or 4 ever email regularly with any sort of feedback. I definitely appreciate constructive thoughts.

I don't have to have a genre label. I may never have one, but I'd be curious if I do without realizing it. Is there a word for the type of stories that I tell?

Wanking Festival (Micro Short Story)

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This father's day we held a Wanking Festival. The competition was stiff but I won because nobody else came.

The events were very hands on. My mum said she would help me beat off the competition. She was very proud of the pearl necklace I gave her for helping me cum in first, second and even a third place.


Finis.


(Seriously though, that may be a fun story to write). A lot of hard practice a head.

Hands Full of Innocence - Chapter Five

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Today, I am posting up chapter four. It may already be published by the time you read this.

Hands Full of Innocence refers to Brunna's big huge knockers that are swinging on her chest. She is seemingly oblivious to what they can do to a boy Jason's age.

I was informed by a Brazilian person that the traditional spelling is "Bruna". Apologies, but a little poetic license was taken and the mom chose a non traditional name.

I was also informed that Brazilian women are not very chesty. That's not been my experience - especially during the Carnival. I knew a Bruna just like her - big old tits and I remember her slowly eat a pickle and contemplating as she did - and thinking just how amazing that mental image was. I tried to paint that for you in chapter three.

Speaking of paint, I am branching out to NSFW AI images. I can't say that I will EXCLUSIVELY use it, but I have used it to illustrate the title and chapters 1-4. It was convincing enough that the mods blurred the title character's eyes. She isn't a real person though.

I hope you enjoy those additions to enhance the story.

The first four chapters really just establish who Jason is and that he is a horny teenager who thinks about boobs night and day stuck on a cramped RV with minimal privacy and the ability to catch glimpses of his cousin's hot body.

Chapter five is where the real story begins. It takes a new direction. I won't discourage you from reading 1-4 but you can skip it entirely if you want to get to the 'meat' of the story.

One through Four is more of a prologue that helps paint the canvas background and setting. I wanted a hot southern vacation in a cramped RV - something many people can relate to. It sleeps "six" but not comfortably, and they have eight people.

There are 15 chapters - so enjoy reliving a summer vacation told from a teenage boy's perspective. This is a departure from many of my much more wild stories. It's still sexual but far more tame.

Mother's Day

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As it is a Holiday, I dont have much time to post today.

I was thinking of a short story on what Mother's day might be like in a D/s House hold.

Any thoughts?

I would encourage you to posting a short story.

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