Eddie Davidson: Blog

As we prepare for Thanksgiving, I am often excited to write some good BDSM holiday stories. I have written a few short stories in the past around a kink-friendly BDSM family might spend the Holidays.

Moms tied up like a Christmas tree with colorful red balls hanging from their nipples, bound with electric lights.

Sister stuffed and mounted on the table like a turkey, with an ear of corn down her throat like a gag, while everyone treats her like a buffet.

Naturally, these are slightly over the top stories (Which can be fun). However, I also like the more subtle ones where kink is in the background. Yes, Mom might get a new Dildo for Christmas a "Stocking Stuffer" but in general the family does a lot of the vanilla things that any other family does.

I'd love to see more stories like that. What is a vacation like for Mom and Dad when they have a Master/Sub relationship? Does she trade in her chastity belt for Mickey Ears and leave it all behind, or is there still aspects of their relationship even at Disney World?

I've wrapped up a lot of my writing projects and expect to go back and complete NIS: Nude at Summer Camp, and possibly even finally close out Visiting Aunt Scarlet.

I am doing a few short stories that I sprinkle here and there. I call it a "Day in the Life" and I may make it a series. Just stories about kinky people walking you through their lives.

The first one on my list is a female dominated household. There is an element of rabid toxic trolls in the community that vote-bomb any femdom stories. I assume they think by punishing authors who dare to write something that scares them they are sending a 'message' to the author.

My message back to them is 'fuck you, I'll write what I want to write."

I don't do a lot of femdom/FLR but every now and then I like my women on top.

Yesterday was a real crazy day for Chapter 9 of Cunt Next Door. I will say that I am pleasantly surprised that so many people took the time to let me know that I fucked up with that chapter.

That wasn't my intention by any means, but what I think it also says is that Cunt Next Door is a really special story. I fuck up all the time and people almost never bother to let me know. This time I had quite a few nice people take the time. it was like their TV set suddenly went on the fritz during a favorite show.

The last issue was related to HTML not playing well with formatting codes from MS Word. I've fixed that in the latest update and added chapter 10.

in the meantime, I ALSO completed writing a story about a wife and her journey of submission. The general premise was that a husband and wife are giving each other midnight confessions in bed. The wife admits she would like to do humiliating and naughty dares.

The husband responds "Really? If we do this, you have to do whatever I say!"

"Wow! okay" the wife responds and off they go. Naturally, as I wrote the actual story though I found myself adding the complications of fantasies getting in the way of real life with jobs, kids, bills, groceries and the fun that also entails of being able to push some of that aside.

it's a fun 10 chapter story that I'll post up after Cunt Next Door.

In the meantime, I am left with some choices of side projects. One thought I had was to try to write a 'short story'.

I use quotes because the last time I tried to do that I ended up writing TWO stories about the family, and 50+ chapters in "Keeping the Entire Family In Line" because I liked the characters so much.

I was thinking that I may just take an unusual picture and start writing a vignette of sorts around what I think the context was of the picture.

That or maybe a "Day in the life" story. It begins with the main character waking up and ends with them falling asleep on a typical day. It doesn't have the "Act 1/Act 2/Act 3" format of a typical story where something surprising happens that leads the character on a journey.

It may just be a British mum and her nudist family off for Holiday in Cornwall, and be about packing sandwiches and how they sunned their buns on the Southern shores of Saint Ives. No blackmail, no life altering events, no mind control, no plot other than a fun day with the family.

It could just as easily be a big titted woman and her two big titted daughters in the trailer park, and how they spend their day, walking up to the store, looking out their patio, drinking a few beers, masturbating, etc.

Many short stories seem to be able to just tell the story of a pretty typical day and let you be a fly on the wall/see out of the main character's eyes. I've never been able to write one successfully. I was thinking perhaps it would be a good exercise for me.

Is that something you would like?

I also have plans to finish a few loose ends (NIS Summer Camp, Visiting Aunt Scarlet) and possibly re-explore Gladiator Brothel.

A few weeks ago I asked if people would be interested in a story about a woman that gets involved in an underground fight club called the "Gladiator Brothel" because wealthy patrons pay to be able to create the conditions of the battle and which women they want to be in it.

I started writing and realized that I suck at action/adventure and writing the gritty and visceral brutality of what combat between two sexy women might be like. It's not just two dudes with tits. There is a whole different vibe to girl fights that I wanted to capture.

I just lacked the skill to really do it. I still want to see the story, not sure if I am the one to write it.

I am open to suggestions/feedback and thoughts.

If you were able to hear me speak you would know that the first word was pronounced /Paul-ish/ which is what I attempted to do to "Cunt Next Door. The second use of the word was pronounced /Pole-ish/ which is how I like my single-moms dancing.

In any case, I don't know what kind of fuck up I had today on chapter nine of cunt next door. It was royal though.

I've had multiple errors. Here is the root of one of them; Mike and I worked on this together and there are times when a revised chapter sort of got folded into the flow of the story.

As I polish (the paul-ish kind) the story and add little details, embellish, and fix grammatical mistakes I missed key points when the entire text repeats between chapters.

The text seemed to fit nicely in both chapters.

My old process was to write a chapter and publish it IMMEDIATELY. I was so happy to share my stories that I'd just publish it as soon as I finished editing it.

However, my new process is to *COMPLETELY* finish a story and then go back and edit it, add illustrations and publish it.

What I am learning is that my memory sucks, and I am running into a new and unanticipated problem months after the chapter was written. I am hoping today's chapter nine was a one-time occurrence but thank you to the readers who are enjoying the story and pointed out the problems.

There were a couple others (chapter 3 somehow got copied into chapter 9). In any case, I think it is sorted now and there is NEW content in the final revised chapter nine, so if you read it earlier today, you may want to go back and double check.

Thanks!

I am not sure how the snafu happened, but thank you to the readers who pointed out chapter three was inadvertently posted twice in place of chapter nine.

I have already uploaded the correct file and I ask that you check back later. You can see the 'updated by' date will have changed in the upper right hand side when Lajeez or his webminions make the update.

In other news, I am finishing up a fun 11 part story about a woman who embraces her submission. It's called "I am bored of me"

I wanted to basically explore what it would be like if during midnight confessions with her husband she said "It turns me on to be told what to do, and to streak..."

The husband would respond with "Okay, but if we do this, you REALLY have to do what I say!"

"Really? You'd be into it?"

and then off I went writing what I feel is a fun, light hearted story with no blackmail, reluctance, or any real 'twist' - just a straight forward women who was tired of being a boring mom and wife, and who embraced her fantasies in a healthy and happy way.

I plan to get back to wrapping up NIS: Nude at Summer Camp. It was never intended to sit so long. My apologies. I just have one more chapter planned.

I will also try my hand at a couple short stories. I do not normally do those, but I'll see what I can do.

I've checked on the "Editor's wanted" board and I thought I'd make a blog post as well.

I am always on the lookout for a possible editor.

I had one that was PERFECTION. He cleanly and efficiently helped me with editing by proof reading and helped me triage grammatical goofs and story holes.

I do not like using external email so I'd just send it to him here on SOL and he'd come back with his suggestions and it worked like clockwork.

I miss that help and if anyone is up for it - I'd love it. I would suggest reading a few recent stories my existing catalog if you aren't familiar with my work to see what themes I write about. They tend to be longer stories that focus on character growth/relationships within a BDSM situation and include kinks/humiliation. That's a gross over simplification though. My inspiration is Vulgus if you are familiar with his work.

However, even if I cannot find a willing proof-reader/editor - what I could also use is a good sounding board to read some of my latest stories while they are in edit and offer feedback/suggestions. It's so hard to work in a bubble. Writing can be a very solitary exercise. I enjoy collaborative efforts, or at the very least someone saying "What about?"

I tend to finish writing a story completely before I start publishing it, so it is a slow process but I often produce a chapter a day. Is that something anyone might be interested in helping with?

You'd have access to the story before it is published, which means that the final version may be changed by the time you see it posted.

I'd like to keep it strictly here though on SOL email for privacy reasons.