Eddie Davidson: Blog

https://storiesonline.net/a/eddie-davidson

All of my stories are located here. I have seventy two stories. I've never added up all the readers and stats, but some of these stories are quite long.

NIS: Breeder is the longest, weighing in at 75 chapters, with room for more.

Many of my early stories were not edited very well, and not illustrated. I did not even own MS Word when I started.

I was maligned, teased, insulted by many of the toxic people who come here primarily to scare off new authors before they can establish themselves.

One of them said "If you were going for the narrative voice of an airhead, you nailed it!!" as a passive aggressive way to tell me I was an idiot.

I think that's what prompted my disgust with people who seem to make it their mission to be toxic here. If you saw my recent "Continuing adventures of the reader who refuses to read story codes" blog post, you'll know what I mean.

I have improved. I've gotten better at illustrating stories. I have a few friends that deserves a lot of credit for helping me (Omega Pet) as an editor and Mike McGifford who is a regular source of inspiration.

I think without the two of them, I might have called it quits.

I have better tools to help me spell check. I have AI tools to illustrate my stories.

I probably started my stride with

https://storiesonline.net/s/20017/do-you-have-a-big-dick

"Do you have a big dick, why not?"

It's one of my most popular stories to date, and people still write me about it. It's a story of a young kid who meets a quiet, shy girl at his school.

It turns out, at home she webcams with her older sister and mom. The mom says the titular line "Do you have a big dick?" implying that unless he has cocaine, money or a big cock, then why waste her time talking to her/she isn't interested.

It's a line I heard an actual stripper say in a night club one night.

She's an aging former stripper, and she raised her daughters to give zero fucks.

It was a fun story with a sequel that I think left those characters in a good place. I always intended to go back and add to it with an update on the main character's younger brother and younger sister.

I've since written dozens of stories, and they are all there - steadily trying to post frequently (sometimes daily).

My current story "NIS: Breeder Program"

https://storiesonline.net/n/33623/nis-breeder-program

Is complete, and 75 chapters. The longest I've ever written. My chapters are 12-15 pages typed, so they aren't tiny. I am just polishing and editing.

I've been working on a pony girl story, and another one called "Visiting Aunt Scarlet" that's about a woman and her son visiting her sister, who works as a prostitute from her home. It's kind of a fun story.

however, the pony girl story really excites me. I posted up a teaser chapter here;

https://storiesonline.net/n/36875/the-new-foal-a-pony-girl-story

I may add another chapter to it, but I am trying to focus on getting the other two completed.

I wanted to mention that I have recently discovered that I have 999 followers. I've been teetering around that number for a really long time. You can 'follow' me from my author page at the top of the blog.

What that does is a mystery to me. I assume it notifies you somehow of my new stories and may put them automatically in your library.

I am reminded me of the narrator in Disney's haunted house. "We have 999 happy haunts here, but there's room for a thousand. Any volunteers?"

They have some of the best literary minds, and their library is well stocked with priceless first editions - only ghost stories written by ghost writers of course."

If you like my recent stories, and are bored waiting for me to post up new chapters, can I suggest taking a look at my back catalog?

I have a lot of similar stories, but also stuff set in the Civil War, I even wrote fan fiction set in a mod in Civilization IV.

Red woke up around 9am.

He logged into the story site that he frequently checked for new erotic literature.

He never paid for a membership to support the cost of running the site, or contributed stories. "Someone else can do that!"

Then he angrily started clicking around the site, and complained about how there weren't many new stories. He chose a story without reading the story codes or description. "Why would I waste time doing that?" he asked the empty room, as he started skimming the story.

The author was new to SOL. It was their first time posting a story. They spent hours working on this first chapter. It was part of a 25 chapter story arc that they wanted to share. They received no compensation for their work other than the satisfaction of knowing they were providing something of value and giving back to the community.

Their editor had spent hours checking over the story, offering advice, and helping the new author.

The author carefully chose all the relevant codes and offered a detailed description of the story, which was about Arthur Morgan's continuing adventures in the Red Dead Redemption Video Game world of the late 1890s. The codes implied this would be a raunchy story full of hot sex, and began with Arthur meeting his long lost love Mary Linton.

She's now a prostitute working in the decadent saloons of Saint-Denis. The hand crafted story is well-researched and references many of the events in the video game that led to the fallen angel's new career.

Red bangs his fist on the keyboard.

"I didn't come on here to read stories about VIDYA GAMES!! THIS ISN'T MY CUP OF TEA!! 6/10" he down votes AND comments based on the first chapter. "This isn't even a story!! It's just the start of one!!!"

Red feels safe in the knowledge that he is providing a valuable service to burgeoning new authors by tearing their new story a second a-hole, and downvoting them to discourage them from continuing.

Red goes to the next new story. Instead of waiting until chapter seven to get a good idea of what this one was about, he down votes it immediately because he doesn't like that author.

"He never writes anything that I like! So I will punish him by giving him a ONE!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!" he says to the empty room with his flaccid penis in his hand.

"Now, when new people come to the site and they are looking for a quality story, they will see this author's hard work, and think it must be terrible," he laughs nefariously over the power he feels he has. He also downvotes it with his second account he created specifically to downvote stories with.

It doesn't matter to Red that voting should really be objective based on the quality of the story. He doesn't like stories that involve fetishes that aren't his particular kink, and wants them to all die a death of misery.

It would be easy for him to avoid them, but Red doesn't bother with story codes. "Those are for wussies," he laments.

He now feels the need to go to each story on the site that contains fetishes that make him uncomfortable and down vote them.

Meanwhile, on the other side of town, Blue is reading a story he enjoyed and not bitching about it, because he fucking looked for the story codes that he likes, and read the description first.

Don't be Red, get Blown.

EDIT:

Today, I saw a guy write that comment "NOT MY CUP OF TEA 6/10" on an author's first chapter of their first story posted on SOL, and it sort of fired me up.

It seemed like he was just trying to encourage the author to stop, when it was obvious that the guy didn't read the codes or he would have known it wasn't his "cup of tea". They wrote precisely what they described in the codes/story description.

In addition, not bagging on free users who use the site without contributing stories. It's an option. It was more the fact that he expects so much for something he pays nothing for that stuck in my craw.

Pay nothing, Do nothing, expect nothing.

Most free users are cool people, and not like Red at all.

I kind of wish we didn't have voting turned on.

It's not a score that ever feels right. People seem to jump to some of the newest stories and immediately downvote if the fetish/kink isn't to their liking.

I've noticed so many new stories where the vote is 6.4.

It's only been up for a day, and it's chapter one. How can you tell that's the score it deserves?

If anything, voting should only materialize after chapter seven. You can't really know how good a story is until you have read into it.

It's very discouraging and I don't see the point in so many great stories listed as "6.4".

On another forum/story site they allow you to see the number of "Thank yous". A person can only send one and you can see who sent it.

You have a tabulation of how many thank yous that you have given, and how many you have received.

To me, that's a positive. It doesn't mire everyone in mediocrity of 6.4 (Slightly above the middle) and it just shows who appreciates you.

Could we do that?

If you aren't an American, you probably could give two shits about the Fourth of July.

However, I wanted to write something short for Fourth of July. I didn't get it completed until pretty much the end of the evening.

https://storiesonline.net/n/34555/firecracker-mom-red-white

It's a mind-control story. The real difference here is to showcase some of my AI imagery. I included 9 captioned photos in two chapters.

I was able to make consistent characters, upscale and really improve upon my craft. I enjoy creating nasty worlds and scenarios and sharing them on here.

I think writing now is just one component of that. The ability to craft my own images enhances and adds to it. On it's own, the story is a relatively novel mind-control story about a boy that hypnotized his mom for the right reasons (stopping smoking) but connects it to her deepest desires to be humiliated and embarrassed through her subconscious.

I also wanted a reason for a woman to shoot bottle rockets out of her asshole, and put sparklers in her butt. If you think that's over the top and outrageous you can find tons of porn of it on the Internet with just a few searches of Youtube and Motherless.com. It's usually done at parties by some slutty bimbo.

It was a challenge getting the AI to recognize what I wanted it to do. However, a bit of a learning process for me.

I made about 120 photos, some of which were perfect for the story. However, I paired them down to the essential.

There was one photo of the gang bang at the end, with hash marks on the woman's ass that would have been perfect. However, I decided to go another way and I already had an illustration for that scene.

Overall, it was probably 10x more enjoyable to me to complete this project WITH pictures, than it would have been to write it without.

Surprisingly (to me, anyway), I received about 9 comments from readers expressing constructive feedback about the story. That's much higher than my normal average of (checks notes)... almost none!!

Some people did not enjoy the twist at the end. I almost didn't add it, but I wanted the story to feel "concluded". I was tempted to go back in an add a different ending.

Let me know if feedback after you read it how you wished the story to have ended?

A few people also wished the story was longer. Me Too! but I am still editing and working on Visiting Aunt Scarlet and NIS: Breeder!

Today, I read an article about a fairly attractive woman who is homeless. She bragged that she uses a dating app to go on a date every night, gets a free meal and usually spends the night with her date.

She doesn't like to commit, so she isn't interested in sticking around, but I bet she has some regulars who give her a good dicking that she can call if she gets bored with her current date/he isn't willing to go that far/that fast.

I call her a "Hobosexual"

I was thinking about a future story about the adventures of such a woman. Would that be interesting?

I was also imagining a wealthy woman or teenager, who has a fetish for getting fucked by homeless people who trolls the local homeless shelters and camps for random outdoor sex, possibly with the support/approval of her husband/boyfriend.

That would be a little different than my normal stories. I am still writing Visiting Aunt Scarlet (it's going to be a two parter), so this is after I complete that.

I also have 75 chapters of NIS Breeder to post, and I am not quite half way done yet with that, so this a month or so away. I am just curious if you'd like that?

Some feedback I received was many of my stories involve a lot of common themes. That's true - I write what I know.

I can't do 50 shades of gray, with an impossibly handsome billionaire who sits around all day in his mansion, waiting for Alex Steele to show up, when he could just hire a porn star to do whatever nasty shit he wants without asking him a bunch of questions.

I don't know how those worlds work.

I can write about what I know - middle class suburbs, trailer park, every day people.

I was also told that I do a lot of humor in my stories. This is because in my real life, I use humor to cope with stuff, and as a defense mechanism and just in general. I reflect that people in weird situations often joke.

I remember once this guy handcuffed a subbie to a shower rod and said "Hang around". We all groaned at the joke, but it's a classic example to me that people like to offer jokes sometimes when it is inappropriate or unexpected.

I was told that I should downplay that in future stories, and that I also have a lot of farting buttholes/big butt girls and geeky, awkward teenagers who are obsessed with asses.

I grew up as a geeky awkward guy who was obsessed with asses, so I write what I know. However, In Visiting Aunt Scarlet - he isn't. I'll see if I can write one story without the focus on big butts, etc.

I am curious to get your feedback on my stories.

I am especially interested in knowing if the AI pictures included are interesting? I like to think that someone is beating off to them. It's kind of flattering to know I helped people crank one out now and again.